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Old 03-28-2010, 05:52 PM   #1
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Jackson moves

Hey!

Im at the moment working on a animation project for school, and right now im working with some Micheal Jackson moves. This is how far I have come, so now it would be perfect for some critique.

Here is the youtube link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1afhx2bG9rk

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Old 03-28-2010, 10:06 PM   #2
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feels stiff, jackson had controlled follow thru, where he kind of catches his weight right before it would slow down. watch some more of his dancing and you'll see what i mean, keep it up...
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Old 03-29-2010, 05:58 AM   #3
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Thanks,
gonna give it a look today
 
Old 03-30-2010, 08:37 PM   #4
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I agree, looks a bit stiff. I watched it a few times and I think his torso needs more fluidity and movement. His weight doesn't seem to shit appropriately either, but I think once you fix the torso, that should start to take care of itself. Good stuff, keep at it.


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