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 Luxor3d Diego
3d animator
Naples,
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aspiring animator needs a lot of advice
Hi everyone, I'm an aspiring animators and I need of some critique from you experts. I have done this run cycle and I wanted to know what yuo think.Please critique, critique, critique my work!!! Thanks a lot...
Here's the link :http://www.diegolettieri.it/video.asp __________________
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White Rabbit
 Bryan Maxwell
Art Director/ Motion Designer
Bottle Rocket Media
Chicago,
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I think your animation looks really good. Seems nice and smooth. You might get the head moving up and down a little more, and maybe some motion in the torso as well to add a little more squash and stretch.
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| 04 April 2010 | |
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Luxor3d Diego
3d animator
Naples,
Italy
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Thank you very much graphix19! any advice is really valuable for me, I'll try and post it again!
Thanks. __________________
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| 04 April 2010 | |
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Frequenter
 kusanagi
sr.Animator
Ubisoft
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yeap it looks nice already
only critique from me is air time / then you run your hips are going up fast and slowing down a little after hips at your run is going to fast down - put few more frames then both feets are in the air it should helped best !!! __________________
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| 04 April 2010 | |
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Luxor3d Diego
3d animator
Naples,
Italy
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many many thanks guys! I was opening my eyes... I'll do as soon as these changes!
P.s. Sorry for my poor English :P __________________
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| 04 April 2010 | |
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Veteran
portfolio
Ryan Somerville
USA
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nice, a real solid run cycle!
i'm no professional, but some critiques that i see is, like nakimushi said, the air time could be fixed. feels like the energy the character is exerting into the ground should have more time in the air, just a bit more air time. |
| 04 April 2010 | |
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Luxor3d Diego
3d animator
Naples,
Italy
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I agree with you jaypeeare! I think there's some mistake in the spacing... 'll put 'together all your advice and try to fix in 3d animation.
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| 04 April 2010 | |
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