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Old 03 March 2010   #1
aspiring animator needs a lot of advice

Hi everyone, I'm an aspiring animators and I need of some critique from you experts. I have done this run cycle and I wanted to know what yuo think.Please critique, critique, critique my work!!! Thanks a lot...

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Old 03 March 2010   #2
I think your animation looks really good. Seems nice and smooth. You might get the head moving up and down a little more, and maybe some motion in the torso as well to add a little more squash and stretch.

Nice work!
Old 04 April 2010   #3
Thank you very much graphix19! any advice is really valuable for me, I'll try and post it again!
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Old 04 April 2010   #4
yeap it looks nice already

only critique from me is air time / then you run your hips are going up fast and slowing down a little after
hips at your run is going to fast down - put few more frames then both feets are in the air
it should helped
best !!!
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Old 04 April 2010   #5
many many thanks guys! I was opening my eyes... I'll do as soon as these changes!

P.s. Sorry for my poor English :P
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Old 04 April 2010   #6
nice, a real solid run cycle!

i'm no professional, but some critiques that i see is, like nakimushi said, the air time could be fixed. feels like the energy the character is exerting into the ground should have more time in the air, just a bit more air time.
Old 04 April 2010   #7
I agree with you jaypeeare! I think there's some mistake in the spacing... 'll put 'together all your advice and try to fix in 3d animation.
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Old 04 April 2010   #8
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