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03 March 2010	#1

Luxor3d New Member portfolio Luxor3d Diego 3d animator Naples, Italy Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 27	aspiring animator needs a lot of advice Hi everyone, I'm an aspiring animators and I need of some critique from you experts. I have done this run cycle and I wanted to know what yuo think.Please critique, critique, critique my work!!! Thanks a lot... Here's the link :http://www.diegolettieri.it/video.asp __________________ *Naples style*
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03 March 2010	#2

graphix19 White Rabbit portfolio Bryan Maxwell Art Director/ Motion Designer Bottle Rocket Media Chicago, USA Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 134	I think your animation looks really good. Seems nice and smooth. You might get the head moving up and down a little more, and maybe some motion in the torso as well to add a little more squash and stretch. Nice work!
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04 April 2010	#3

Luxor3d New Member portfolio Luxor3d Diego 3d animator Naples, Italy Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 27	Thank you very much graphix19! any advice is really valuable for me, I'll try and post it again! Thanks. __________________ *Naples style*
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04 April 2010	#4

nakimushi Frequenter portfolio kusanagi sr.Animator Ubisoft Montreal, Canada Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 138	yeap it looks nice already only critique from me is air time / then you run your hips are going up fast and slowing down a little after hips at your run is going to fast down - put few more frames then both feets are in the air it should helped best !!! __________________ a sztuka ... odnalezc to czego sie szuka
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04 April 2010	#5

Luxor3d New Member portfolio Luxor3d Diego 3d animator Naples, Italy Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 27	many many thanks guys! I was opening my eyes... I'll do as soon as these changes! P.s. Sorry for my poor English :P __________________ *Naples style*
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04 April 2010	#6

jaypeeare Veteran portfolio Ryan Somerville USA Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 43	nice, a real solid run cycle! i'm no professional, but some critiques that i see is, like nakimushi said, the air time could be fixed. feels like the energy the character is exerting into the ground should have more time in the air, just a bit more air time.
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04 April 2010	#7

Luxor3d New Member portfolio Luxor3d Diego 3d animator Naples, Italy Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 27	I agree with you jaypeeare! I think there's some mistake in the spacing... 'll put 'together all your advice and try to fix in 3d animation. __________________ *Naples style*
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