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  09 September 2003
2D: a sad story: when a machine fell in love...

<when a machine fell in love>.
(painter 7, 20 hours+)

c+c please, thank you.

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Last edited by mazzaloth : 09 September 2003 at 05:33 AM.
 
  09 September 2003
some part of this work
(oh my poor English )





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  09 September 2003
no comments? i think its nice and creative
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  09 September 2003
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i THINK tHE tITLE COULD Be grammatically corrected...
It should be "When a machine falls in love" or when a machine fell in love"

Other than that....some reflected light on the fingers would provide some more contrast and make the hand stand out a little more...right now,I feel It seems to get lost in the darkness.

Jus my 2Cents.
Its a very cstrong Concept with a unique approach.
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  09 September 2003
Visually it looks interesting, I don't really understand the message though
 
  09 September 2003
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thank you DEVARSHY

Quote: Originally posted by DEVARSHY
i THINK tHE tITLE COULD Be grammatically corrected...
It should be "When a machine falls in love" or when a machine fell in love"

Other than that....some reflected light on the fingers would provide some more contrast and make the hand stand out a little more...right now,I feel It seems to get lost in the darkness.

Jus my 2Cents.
Its a very cstrong Concept with a unique approach.
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  09 September 2003
Good concept, saddening also.

I would say a bit too dark in some areas, and I agree on the need of some incidental light on the edges of the arm and maybe the toilet to bring some details up.

Nice!
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  09 September 2003
Thumbs down

Pain of Love ? Maybe I don't know what you want to express,but your work is really amazing~~~~~~~I love it!!
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  09 September 2003
I was surprised and honored so much to get advice from you. I found that the drawing looks much better than before as a whole after I retouched it according to your advice. Thank you very much.

Quote: Originally posted by robcamp
Good concept, saddening also.

I would say a bit too dark in some areas, and I agree on the need of some incidental light on the edges of the arm and maybe the toilet to bring some details up.

Nice!
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Last edited by mazzaloth : 09 September 2003 at 05:44 AM.
 
  09 September 2003
Nice picture , even if the plot of the image is not clear for me...
Maybe you can explain?
 
  09 September 2003
I love it, I guess the robot went down the drain
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  09 September 2003
that comes from a dream of mine. a robot falls in love with a human being, then ... eventually ... but I just couldn't remember all about it, so I had to record it by drawing with my imagination. thank you for your concerning.

Quote: Originally posted by Vesuvando
Nice picture , even if the plot of the image is not clear for me...
Maybe you can explain?
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  09 September 2003
Smile

good work!~ it better then my,i just to learn painter8 a few time ago,(sorry my english very limited.T_T)
 
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