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Old 11-10-2009, 11:55 PM   #1
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VFX demo reel 2009

any C&C would be greatly appreciated. I am graduating in in 2 months. working on my breakdown reel and will be uploaded soon.

http://mikeviera.com/reel.html

thanks in advance
 
Old 11-11-2009, 10:59 PM   #2
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Old 11-13-2009, 03:54 AM   #3
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Well, it`s hard to give feedback on a reel called "Demoreel incomplete", like people won`t know if the obvious things they are seeing is just some unfinished work or some flaws.

Well the first thing I see is that your reel doesn`t show any contact info / job title you are looking for. Of course there is the "glass of water intro" but your name is hard to read and the other infos are missing ( perharps it`s just not done yet )

So far it`s allright, the only thing I would really remove is the "car shot" in the middle of the reel, it`s so short that it`s hard to see what`s going on, it made me rewind back to see what was that, but even after that it doesn`t feel really good.

I enjoyed the second "car shot" with the Audi logo, maybe it should happen earlier in your reel.

The order of the shots is important to give a good first/last impresssion, like if you sort your work by quality in your reel it should go "BEST, GOOD, BEST ( for desert )"

If you have 2 months left until graduation then it`s more than enough to make this reel awesome

*please forgive my english
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