|06 June 2009|
Secret Agent Entry: james pierechod
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Last edited by pierechod : 07 July 2009 at 08:05 AM.
|06 June 2009|
Ready for the first challenge
Hope we have enough time to complete this one.
We will introduce the team and the story in the next couple of days!
look forward to seeing some more quality video work! I love these challenges!
|07 July 2009|
Scripting stage 01
Ok heres the rough idea
Ok, here's the start of the idea. We are probably altering various parts of this to get to the trailer.
When does we reveal the agent is the Queen?
Why is titus so bad, how did this happen?
1: Windsor Castle garden party
2: We see guests milling about with queen in the background. Over the heads of the crowd we slowly zoom in on her.
3: Type: “There was a time when the queen wasn’t just the
ruler of the empire…”
4: A trusty butler-sidekick whispers to Queen Victoria
“….but its greatest protector too.”
6 QV excuses herself and accesses her secret agent room
7: Butler reports a robbery in progress at Crystal Palace
8: Cut to dastardly gentlemen thief powered by personal airship taking jewellery from the great exhibition
9: QV arrives in secret agent gear.
10-12: Fight scene on top of Crystal Palace. QV defeats gentleman thief. QV quips “One is rather good at kicking butt, no?”
13: Whirling Times newspaper: ‘Mystery agent apprehends absolute rotter’
14: Windsor Castle
15: Prince Albert oblivious to Queen’s dual role
16: Houses of Parliament: PM speaks “Reports are reaching us that our empire is going up in smoke quite literally.”
17-19: Scenes of cites around the world being engulfed in black smoke.
20: QV asks Butler who is doing this.
21: Cut to northern mansion / industrial complex, secret HQ of Sir Titus Bronchitis. He stands surrounded by drones as million of smoke machines are produced on the factory floor.
22: Sir Titus Bronchitis stands next to an ornate shrine to his parents: “Let the toffs choke! My parents died penniless in the workhouse but thanks to my new powers, I have been reborn as an instrument of their revenge. Soon the whole world shall splutter the name of Titus Bronchitis!
23: Butler: “Ma’am, he’s just overcome a whole brigade of Scots Dragoons”
QV: “The Blighter!”
24: Butler: “Ma’am, fingerprint analysis suggests he is Titus Bronchitis the northern coal baron who last year accidentally fell into a steam powered pinning. Presumably he is now a mutated megalomaniac world-hating supervillain hell-bent on revenge! Funny thing is, Ma’am, you knighted him only two years ago”
25: QV: says “The ungrateful northern oink!”
26: Titus speaks to his evil henchmen “Every city in the in the empire is now enshrouded . But I have left the main prize till last. London. The Smoke is about to get smoked out. Launch the hell-bound express – next stop Kings Cross!
27: Cut to steam train whizzing towards London, its rear carriage is one huge ticking huge smoke bomb.
28: Butler: “Your majesty, red alert.”
29: Prince Albert : “Honeykins we have an invitation to the King of Spain’s nephew’s christening.”
30: QV: “It shall have to wait, Albert dear.”
31: Scenes onboard the speeding train, as QV tries desperately to stop it. We see her leap across carriages as the train goes over vertigo inducing viaducts
32-37: Final confrontation on top of massive Titus Bronchitis HQ chimney. It is surrounded by dozens of mile-high industrial chimney stacks. The fight between Titus and Victoria takes place at the top as they jump from one massive chimney to the next. The chimneys start crumbling and falling into each other like giant dominos.
38 QV looks annoyed : “One is going to tear one a new one.”
39: Type: Agent QV
40: Type: This time, Her Majesty is the Secret Service.
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