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Old 03-07-2009, 03:42 PM   #1
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WIP female face

This is a head I created in zbrush.
Now Im adding color and hair and so on in photoshop.
Been strugeling with the hair for a while now.
Any coments on what looks good or bad?

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Old 03-08-2009, 04:09 PM   #2
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proportions

Ive decided to add a body to the head..
Any comments on the proportions?
Or suggestions?

Ive decided to add a body to the head..
Any comments on the proportions?
Or suggestions?
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Old 03-08-2009, 08:50 PM   #3
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a litle further..


working on it...
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Old 03-08-2009, 11:06 PM   #4
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thats it for today..

Critique and comments are allways welcome!..

Critique and comments are allways welcome!..
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Old 03-08-2009, 11:49 PM   #5
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I was trying to figure out what was bothering me about this; it's her lips I think. The upper seems too big or the lower seems too small. Could you post the front side zbrush renders?


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Old 03-08-2009, 11:58 PM   #6
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Thank you!

Thank you! Ill look in to that...
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Old 03-09-2009, 02:18 AM   #7
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Yeah. I think her upper lip is too large and sticks out too much. Perhaps the distance between her nose and upper lip is a bit much as well? Post this 3D render in the 3D WIP forum and you'll get more detailed suggestions.

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Thumbs up thanks!

IŽll try to change those things and see what it looks like.
For now iŽll continue working on the body.
Thanks alot for the input!
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Old 03-09-2009, 06:47 PM   #9
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Thumbs up had to check it..

Hmm... It look better! What do u think?
But.. perhaps some of the sadness in her face disapeared? gah..
I think IŽll leave it for now, unless I get more good pointers
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Old 03-09-2009, 06:55 PM   #10
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She doesn't look sad to me, she looks more angry. I think it's because her eyebrows are pointing down. If it weren't for the tears I wouldn't have guessed she was supposed to be sad.
 
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Her lip looks better. But she doesn't look sad. Take a look here:
http://www.friedmanarchives.com/Car...%20PICT4599.htm
and adjust your 3d model to match those features even a bit - right now your model has a neutral face - fine when sculpting but not when you want so show emotion.

Hope that helps.

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Old 03-12-2009, 07:07 PM   #12
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Wink thanks guys...

thank you for the feedback.
IŽm not aiming for a very sad look, more like "I cared 2 seconds ago, now I dont give a shit"--
Hahah hard to explain.. anyway I think the nostrils looked more "sad" before I changed the mouth.. sounds weird huh?
...wish I had more time for working on this
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Old 03-13-2009, 12:07 AM   #13
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That's an interesting expression - I suspect you're just going to have to ask someone to make that face and take a picture - trying to figure out what it "might" look like will just give you a migraine...


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