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Old 02 February 2009   #1
Jumping Train


Hi! My name is Gilberto Magno. I'm 2d and 3d artist in Brazil.
About my post ... the idea came in a morning after observing works tirelessly to Jacek Yerka and Jim Warren. As the deadline was 10 days, ran with the composition to deliver.
I would like suggestions for improving my work.

Thank you!

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Composition in: Maya, Zbrush and Photoshop.
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Last edited by gmagno : 02 February 2009 at 03:34 AM.
 
Old 02 February 2009   #2
Great job! I think your piece is already there. You asked for suggestions. A couple things maybe worth considering, is adding a bit mre depth in the water, and possibly a bit more contrast to help separate each of the elements. I hope it's helpful, like I said, great job.
 
Old 02 February 2009   #3
There seems to be a lot of grain that came from your canvas overlay, seems to detract a bit from the image i think. Great job though.
 
Old 02 February 2009   #4
Thanks for the suggestions. I'm working to improve this work. I'm also adjusting the colors.
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_o693z6VFr...-h/progress.jpg
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Old 02 February 2009   #5
Sorry... double post!
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Old 02 February 2009   #6
Sorry... double post!
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Old 02 February 2009   #7
Sorry... double post!
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