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Old 06-22-2003, 05:51 AM   #1
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Environment: FireFly Inn

feedback welcomed. done in Lightwave.

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Old 06-22-2003, 07:41 AM   #2
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What a beautiful image!!
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Old 06-22-2003, 08:39 AM   #3
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Very nice, the more I see of Lightwave, the more I want to learn it.

Might want to up the bump on the brick/tiles a tad. It looks a bit flat at the moment.

AND TELL US HOW YOU DID THE WINDOWS!!!


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Old 06-22-2003, 10:23 AM   #4
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Yeah, I like this slight painted style.
 
Old 06-22-2003, 11:05 AM   #5
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i like it LW rocks.

only crit is that the beams would have the stones surround them and line up to it, not just smacked down like in your pic. small error i know but i think its the only one!
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Old 06-22-2003, 02:18 PM   #6
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Please make a render at 1280x1024, I want this as my background
 
Old 06-22-2003, 06:26 PM   #7
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The windows are just a simple painted texture with a luminance channel and I added a glow to it in LW. I'll put the window texture up (and a bigger render) at the end of today.
Thanks for the comments, they really help me understand what others see in my work!

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Old 06-22-2003, 07:44 PM   #8
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Beautiful. Sky maybe a tad too strongly blue in places for my taste, btu that's just me. A building this old might not be quite so geometrically correct either, but again, small crit.

Lovely work, keep it up!
 
Old 06-22-2003, 10:20 PM   #9
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If that's water in the front I'd say it needs a little more work. I at first thought it was a path. I think the color should be closer to the sky color. I like the glowing bugs and the smoke.
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Old 06-22-2003, 10:28 PM   #10
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nice image... i too agree about the water, i coulda swore it was a path till it was mentioned.... and from the dated look of the sign i would think the building might be a little more deteriated... still a very nice image. good work
 
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I agree the about the water, It was the first time I'd ever tried making water. I finally worked it out on the third image (you can see the results on Midnight Beloved) I prefer that water.

I wanted to add a boat to the shot but ran out of steam. This whole image was inspired by the sleepy hollow movie by Tim Burton. My images have been coming out with great "feel", without the "Look" I think I need to add more age and inperfections.

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Old 06-23-2003, 01:15 AM   #12
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one for color, the other for illumination. I apllied a glow to the shader as well.
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Old 06-23-2003, 08:41 AM   #13
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very nice
i like your style
 
Old 06-23-2003, 08:11 PM   #14
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I'd really like to hear the negative comments from viewers, I need to know why so many have looked and not made a comment, don't be shy, hammer away! I want it, I can take it.
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Old 06-23-2003, 09:01 PM   #15
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Very nice, but there something that I don`t like about the pumpkin, the rest is beautiful
 
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