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Old 06-20-2003, 09:59 PM   #1
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Still Life: Oranges

edit: updated pic farther down

I had some time to kill this morning, and I was a bit bored so I decided to make a still life scene. The oranges look a tiny bit glassy or wet, but I don't feel like tweaking it anymore so i'm leaving it as is.


theres a second version here, but i'm not sure which one I like more.

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Old 06-20-2003, 10:13 PM   #2
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Id say too many reflections. Oranges aint that shiny But I like it!
 
Old 06-20-2003, 10:19 PM   #3
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I like the second pic slightly more. Also you should totally tweak the specularity, if you got that perfect then these oranges would be photorealistic. Also, nice wood texture. Great job fakie.

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Old 06-20-2003, 10:19 PM   #4
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u know that the oranges are are bit shiny, why not turn the reflection. The texture really good, and i like the hdri. Its almost perfect.

I prefer the first one, the second looks a bit like lemons.

Nice work.
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Old 06-20-2003, 10:39 PM   #5
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As we've all said, you should tone down the reflections a tad (although oranges are actually somewhat shiny), but this is a truly awesome render! I'm not sure which of the two render I like more, probably the second one - it fits "oranges" better IMO.
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Old 06-20-2003, 11:39 PM   #6
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ok ok, I decided just to open it back up real quick and turn down the reflection so heres the new and final version, with less glossiness:

again, theres a second brighter version here
 
Old 06-21-2003, 12:31 AM   #7
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damn those are looking sweet
i really like those bright version of it !! ^_^
where did you get the wood textures?
 
Old 06-21-2003, 12:39 AM   #8
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that's very nice ! the background looks a little empty... It makes this picture a bit too "classic", but that's cool anyway
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Old 06-21-2003, 01:18 AM   #9
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thanks

The wood texture most likely came from this site, though it might have come from this one
 
Old 06-21-2003, 04:24 AM   #10
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Bump map needs to be a little more wrinkly and the color is a little off. Needs more orange and less yellow I think.

BTW, too good for BHD??? :shame:
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wow just about makes me hungry for some oranges

it looks just about real and it looks good good job for a still life
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Old 06-21-2003, 07:39 AM   #12
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i feel that orange texture are not real enuff, not detailed
but overall is great!!! love the shine. the shines make it looks very tastefully sweet orange!
hey i still prefer the glossy orange, why u change it? the feel is gone..shiny 1 is really great

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Old 06-21-2003, 10:18 AM   #13
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pretty damn good - I could use some vodka with those

btw....the sticker shouldn't have a 'bump' to it - just checking out my actual ones, cuz I wasn't sure - but most stickers are relatively smooth, shiny, i.e. plastic surface....

very good otherwise though - put it in a mag and not tell anyone it was rendered and they would never guess.......
 
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hey!
I like this texture!
What CGtool is you using ?
If u have Msn or Icq,please add me!
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