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Old 07-10-2008, 08:22 PM   #1
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A moment of peace, Cadre Picariello (3D)



Title: A moment of peace
Name: Cadre Picariello
Country: USA
Software: Photoshop, Poser, Vue

This piece is heavily influenced by from a piece called "Samurai Sunset" by David Rivera and colored by SeanE. They are both very talented artists.

I wanted to work with colors and silhouettes on a piece, and this was what came out of it. I like how this came out, and hopefully you do as well.

Thank you for looking and please feel free to leave a comment and let me know what you think.

Edit: I reduced the size of her breasts to a more natural size. Thank you for your feedback and constructive criticism.
 
Old 07-11-2008, 12:37 PM   #2
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I really like it it has a tast, simply adn nice. 4*
 
Old 07-11-2008, 03:15 PM   #3
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Nice work. Very colorful.



Few crits..
I would move the sword forward slightly to create a space between the torso and the hilt, which could make her pose even lighter.

The sky is good, thought way too "smudge"-brushed.

Her breast are too big.. The "moment of peace" gets ruined by the fact that its a naked porn star posing. Cant help saying.

The lower sets of leaves on the tree screams of "alpha plane".

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Honestly, I didn't see her breasts at all in the picture. In fact I didn't even know she was naked. I thought that was just her sleeve, so I think that may be up to interpretation if one new nothing about Poser.

But either way, still a very nice, peaceful image. You got some helpful suggestions so I won't bother with that. =] Good job.

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Old 07-11-2008, 07:02 PM   #5
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Have to agree with Hakan

When sharing Poser-art, one way to be taken more seriously is to NOT focus on the breasts, which is 95% of the reason people get into Poser in the first place. The mood was wonderful and light and I love silhouettes, but having noticed the porn-star extremeness of "her" now it really just screams, "Another Naked Vicky With a Sword."

But otherwise I love the color scheme and sky and grass! The tree's lighter leaves seem out of place, but doesn't look bad, just a bit digitalized there where the alpha is blurred out...
 
Old 07-11-2008, 07:25 PM   #6
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I realy like this my only crit is the size of the breasts i think a little smoler it would be better.
good job! 4*
 
Old 07-12-2008, 12:01 AM   #7
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Beautiful.
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Old 07-12-2008, 04:52 AM   #8
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nice work
 
Old 07-12-2008, 06:08 PM   #9
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nice work~
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Old 07-12-2008, 10:36 PM   #10
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i know the piece that this is influenced by...wonderful interpritation...beautiful colors...very appealing to the eye...as far as the breasts go i do feel that they are a little big but i can see why you chose that....if you had small breasts you wouldnt get the same silouette that i feel you were going for...so i say nice job and a beautiful piece
 
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i know the piece from which this was influenced by.....wonderful interpritation....i love the colors and the lighting...i also really like the smudged look in the sky..
as far as the breasts go i do think they are a little big however i do understand why you may have chosen to go that way...if the breasts were too small you wouldnt get that beautiful shilouette that you have so wonderfully achieved...so i say wonderful job and beautiful image
 
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