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Old 11-19-2007, 12:21 PM   #1
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Rota wip

Hi there!

This is a piece I've beem workin' for a while ( in my freetime). Still need to pose him, and he definitely needs a gun. Hope you like it :




Stay tuned, more to come:
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Old 11-19-2007, 12:39 PM   #2
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Hi Rota!
nice to see you again..
pretty nice character, great arm details
i saw your other works, like the normal mapped head .
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Old 11-20-2007, 06:29 PM   #3
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Lookin' good.

The hairline sticks out to me as a bit to defined. Also, the skin tone seems kind on monotone. Some variation and some scars would help. The boxers and pants also seem to be too flat against his skin. They should look more like they are on top of his body, not a part of it.

The tattoos look great and the muscle/vein detail looks sweet too.

I am assuming you are adding a spec map?

Looking forward to the progress.
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Old 11-21-2007, 04:46 PM   #4
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bzsolt : Cheers! and thanks a lot.
Gaboon: Thanks, and I agree almost evetything you said, workin on it.


In the meantime an another wip :


Hope you like this too.

Rota
 
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