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Old 04-12-2003, 12:25 AM   #1
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Hi all :annoyed:

"itís funny how the world can be so cold. Sometimes I feel that no one understands, no one can feel what I feel. Sometimes it gets so bad that I feel so black and cold deep inside, that I am alone. Sometimes I just want to scream and let out all that I feel inside. But I canít. Itís not because I am not a real girl or something. Itís because I fear that no one will hear me."


This is my latest animation of "yara" ..

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Old 04-12-2003, 12:36 AM   #2
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Hmm don't think you'll get much comments with real player files, you'll have better luck with .avi's or .mov's

BTW why the angry face?

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Old 04-12-2003, 12:43 AM   #3
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Old 04-12-2003, 03:06 AM   #4
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not bad. The shadow is flickering quite a bit and the lyp sync isn't quite right...althought you are certaintly on the right track! There also needs to be some eye movement, she's just stareing blankley into space at this point.

Good work with the head/eyebrow movement.
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Old 04-12-2003, 05:09 AM   #5
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Great stuff! I like the expression on her face and I think the modeling and texturing is really nice.

Although I do have to agree the lip sync seems a bit off. I think a small part of it has to do with the echo effect which seems a bit too digital so it almost seems like someone else is talking.

And the last still images are really great but I have a feeling it might not fit in to the animation so well, especially since well.. it's not animated. I was kinda looking forward to see the girl move as a whole, but as of now it looks more like a bonus pinup which kinda breaks the mood of the whole clip.

I'm not sure where the flickering is coming from but seeing that. an image of a girl standing in front of fire seems to come in to mind. Like the fire light flickering in front of her casting all sorts of shadows going randomly.

I hope you don't take this to any offense, I really like your work. I think you have something going on here.
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