A6M2 Zero, Joshua Maurer (3D)

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Old 03 March 2007   #1
A6M2 Zero, Joshua Maurer (3D)



Title: A6M2 Zero
Name: Joshua Maurer
Country: Canada
Software: XSI

Class Assignment Model>texture>Render>Composite
We had to model a WW2 plane of our choice. This is my 3rd 3D model.
 
Old 03 March 2007   #2
No bad at all, but there is some artefacts from the compositing. In particular on the left side of the image, we can clearly see a vertical, unnatural demarcation in the fog element. As for the composition, and this is truly subjective of my part, I find the planes too centred in the image. The image feels disequilibrated. The Kanji characters help in balancing the composition but the image is still off a little. Overall though, I like it.
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Old 03 March 2007   #3
I agree with the other cirt. The fog needs a little work and shifting the plans would also help. Great job though.
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