She... at the Foot of the Tree, WIP

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Old 02 February 2007   #1
She... at the Foot of the Tree, WIP

Okay... I've been working on this one off and on over the last couple months. Stalled more than a few times, but I kept plowing through... I'm nearly done, but have yet to do the final final clean-up, etc...

I'm trying to figure out what will give it that last little push...

The underdrawing was done in graphite on vellum, then painted entirely in photoshop... roughly 7K pixels wide.

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Old 02 February 2007   #2
hey great piece of work!
love the textures n mood
especially love how u did the tree

would crit on the size of the back of her head, it seems abit too huge to me.. but since u're already on the last stages of the painting...

the branch in the foreground looks more like a shadow
not sure if it'll help the mood but try a little backlighting?
as some light from the glow around the girl should reach the branch.

That aside, i honestly love the piece as it is

Respectfully,
Cow
 
Old 02 February 2007   #3
cow: Thanks so much for the feedback! Those are all great suggestions. Yeah... there is something weird about the back of the head... Maybe have to fix it in post ;-). Thanks!
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