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Old 02 February 2007   #1
Dominance War II: Heber

hey guys been a long time since ive worked on anything so this is my chance to finish something,
its still rough but its gets the point across, id love to hear some ideas especially with the tattoos/branding around his body i want to get something a little more unique going with that aspect of it.
shadow: aldar archer
proficiencies: stealth,marksmen

Aldar is a skilled archer that can hunt in silence from a distance or stealthily sneak up on enemies and impale them with his arrows.
Once a member of a great tribe of warrriors aldar was cast out for attempting to kill his predecesor to have his place.
After wondering as a traveller for so long he is tired of it and feels the need to prove himself in the war.


Last edited by Heber : 03 March 2007 at 06:07 AM.
Old 02 February 2007   #2
Nice start. Good concept, but your going to have to be able to penetrate armour and sheilds with those arrows... Look forwards to seeing updates.
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Old 02 February 2007   #3
ooh forgot to mention that, i was thinking the bow is more tech/futuristic than traditional and the arrows themselves could be made of some super titanium capable of penetrating the hardest of shields and of course the muscle behind it helps.
Old 02 February 2007   #4
hey heber!

great seeing you here. i like your concept and story.
think he would look cool'er without the horns. i like the tatoos on the arms but i'm not so sure about the one on the stomach.
looking forward to your next update.

Old 02 February 2007   #5
Looks nice Hebe... are you still concepting his gear? I think some assymetrical armour pieces would work nicely for the silhouette, as well as material seperation in the render. Maybe a nubby horn on his forehead would work.

Old 02 February 2007   #6
Cool start...

I've browsed your work, and I'm looking forward to seeing the finish... The silhouette is interesting, there are some anatomy issues ( which I assume you are aware of)... I agree a few asymmetrical touches would fair well... The stomach tattoo (in my opinion is feminine) I think if maybe they were more tribal possibly... also is the white line across his chest a tattoo as well or straps for the arrows?
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Old 02 February 2007   #7
Nice start Hebs, I really like how you pursue the concept by just doing the silhouette.

I'll definetely keep an eye on this thread!

Old 02 February 2007   #8
Cool concept heber...Im a really fan o f your work!
Good luck
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Old 02 February 2007   #9
hi heber, nice to see you in.
I like your first sketch, can't wait to see more progress man

have fun man
Old 02 February 2007   #10
thanks for all the replies guys i updated the sketch (based on the crits) thats about all the trying to draw i can handle so moving onto model now.
update soon...

Last edited by Heber : 02 February 2007 at 05:09 AM.
Old 02 February 2007   #11
NIce update. What kind of lizard are you basing the face on?
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Old 02 February 2007   #12
Nice one Heber, cant wait to see it in 3d
Old 02 February 2007   #13
Good luck mate nice to see you throw down.
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Old 02 February 2007   #14
o shit! heber you are already the winner in my book
Old 02 February 2007   #15
thanks guys,
dmonk: nothing in particular really but im taking cues from bats/wolves/aliens etc for the face.

Heres a quick proxy i made yesterday, the armour stuff is just standin for now as i will probably change that quite a bit since im not liking it anymore but the body is ready to be sculpted.

**removed image.

Last edited by Heber : 02 February 2007 at 10:08 AM.
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