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Old 11-10-2006, 12:54 AM   #1
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WIP monologue animation

I was working on this for the 10 second club, but never got around to finishing it. I wanted to get some critiques on it so I can finish it.
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http://www.mysharefile.com/v/385457...Comp_1.mov.html
 
Old 11-10-2006, 07:18 PM   #2
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anybody? please help me out
 
Old 11-10-2006, 07:25 PM   #3
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hey niccolo, I finally got to watch it. Took forever to download, probably because I've got a slow connection. It looks pretty good. I don't really have any suggestions other than slow it down a bit. He makes a lot of poses for it being only 12 seconds.
 
Old 11-10-2006, 08:08 PM   #4
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Thanks Sky, Yeah I was thinking of taking out a pose cause there might be too much going on.

I was going to take the pose put when he says "chaos" and simplyfy it more.

Thanks for your feedback
 
Old 11-10-2006, 09:53 PM   #5
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Hey there, I agree with the above, there seems to be a bit much. Also, try to have the character have focus, his eyes and and head are shifting a bit much, whats he focusing on when he talks. Hold him in "focus-mode" more when he's saying certain things...
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Old 11-10-2006, 11:10 PM   #6
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Thanks for the crit Moose, I was trying to have him look as though he was talking to a group of people so I had him look around to each side. But I agree with you and maybe I will have him focus more towards the camera.
 
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