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  09 September 2006

Hi!Thanks for your attention and waiting for the opinions.

  09 September 2006
Hi Irina this one is great you have to take attention to your black levels, for instance the photo you have for the foreground trees has one specific exposure and some of the buildings have another, their black levels are stronger for that aereal perspective,also I think some of the buildings still look too sketchy besides the real ones coming from a photo, maybe the composition is a little bit simple , check this articles I'm sure they will help you a lot in composition and other technical stuff

Jaime Jasso
Lead Digital Matte Artist
Industrial Light and Magic

  09 September 2006

Thanks Jaime very much!
  09 September 2006
hu, it's better but there is still a problem with areal perspective
shadows on the trees in the background are really grey (logical) but the fact that the red building and the others around it have really BLACK shadows is completely illogical...
the background should be desaturated because of the amount of atmosphere between the viewer and the subject
don't forget this
Shake sky and earth to reach your dreams
  09 September 2006
Thanks for advice
  10 October 2006
The only thing that sticks out to me really is that the perspective seems to go "off" a little towards the furthest part of that cape there. It's like your groundlevel was rising just a tad, but there is no hill there... Correcting the rightmost 1/4 of the shore- and treeline there a little so it tapers off to the same vanishing point as the buildings do would help. It's really not a big thing, but to me it doesn't quite look right.
  10 October 2006
Hi, this looks really cool.
What i would do, is make a visible, bright sun, to contrast the dark foreground
objects (palms etc).
  10 October 2006
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