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Old 08-17-2006, 11:03 PM   #1
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Moom animation test

Hello everybody, I'm currently working on animation of this cool character by Ramjin, Please critique.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_6wUBtNWDSo
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Old 08-17-2006, 11:14 PM   #2
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Not a lot to critique on yet. What is happening in the scene because all I see now is him putting his hand in front of his mouth and sort of slides his chair back in fear. I think you might want to show what is scaring him, either by adding a part inbetween showing the scaring thing or changing the angle on the entire animation so you don't lose momentum.
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Hmm whats happening in the scene is that he is getting bored and yawning, and then the light should go off and he should fall off his chair..
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Hmm, I'm sorry but it's kinda hard to see because there are no real extremes, it's more like a flow of constant moves. Maybe choose some more recognizable extremes.
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