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Old 05-20-2006, 01:37 PM   #1
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This is image for Labirynt Boox contest and CG portal Max3D.pl
Subject is Alien Other Word. I painted big Giant with his egg. Egg is feadin like tree. Becose of my terribe english thats all of my comment
 
Old 05-20-2006, 03:11 PM   #2
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Wow, very cool!
I think the problem is lack of depth. Itīs kind of hard o tell whatīs in the background and whatīs in the foreground.

Maybe adding some fog or making the colors towards the bakground more desaturated will fix this.
 
Old 05-21-2006, 02:44 PM   #3
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I agree. Maybe try to make it in a dark moods, add some light - tell a story with a light

edit: I think You should darken up the first plan. The light would go "from" the picture then

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Old 09-11-2006, 05:59 PM   #4
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Cool im back:)

some udate. fogg added and some details. workin`

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Old 09-12-2006, 01:33 AM   #5
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If you darken the rocks and bushes in your first plan, the whole background will come alive. I wouldn't be afraid to lose the details there as it would draw the viewer into the environment. I'd make them as dark as the wall on the top right corner of the image.

Then you can boost the yellow tint on the background for maximum contrast, with perhaps some gloom and bluriness to show distance and scale. It would have quite a dramatic effect. I think it's a great illustration as is now, but a bit too busy due to the amount of the details.

Here's what I mean, with due apologies for the quick paintover:

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