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Old 05 May 2006   #1
seeking crits

just looking for crits on an old image of mine that could do with touching up
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Old 05 May 2006   #2
Okay.... it's kind of weird. Floating heads confuse me. The drawing looks nice, quality-wise, with the exception of the shadow running over the left (her left) eye. It breaks up the face and makes it look almost cubist, which I doubt is what you were going for. I'd also consider a neck and shoulders, or instead an explanation of why this particular female head is floating.
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Old 05 May 2006   #3
Actually it looks like a mask right now, is that what it's meant to be?
 
Old 05 May 2006   #4
It was just a pencil rendering of an architectural detail I found interesting but with a couple added details.
Now that its been mentioned the shadow on the left side of the face does look a little odd to me.
 
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