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Old 05-17-2006, 10:26 AM   #1
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Standing up - Will Christiansen

Heya all... so this is a more finalized version of the stand up, any glaring problems/different things you'd like to see happen? pointers, stuff?

http://www.willchristiansen.com/ani...5_breaking2.avi

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Old 05-17-2006, 05:23 PM   #2
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My reccomendation would be have him settle a little after he stands up. He stand straight up into the final position w/o any "follow thru"? (not the word I'm looking for, but hope it makes sense) Other than that it looks great, good sense of weight, and natural movement.
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Old 05-18-2006, 10:19 PM   #3
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looks really good until the stand-up, then he gets really rigid. I agree with Zyrinx that you should do more follow through when he stands up...some thing more natural...

Other than that, it looks great!
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