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Old 04-12-2006, 03:55 AM   #1
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Colonization Of Mars

Posting my entry for the "Journey Begins" challenge. Of course it's a work in progress and I'm looking for another set of eyes. Thank you in advance for your advice.

 
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i really like the concept you've got here, i'm interested to see where it goes. i know its an early stage but i think overall you could do with more texture, and certainly something interesting in the sky would go a long way. good luck!
 
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Thanks for your reply! I felt the same way, more texture. One of my goals was to shoot for depth and really bring out the dynamics of the illustration. I have added some structures in the canyon and space ships in the sky. Iím trying to keep the girl as the main focus and then lead the eye to the background.

I was wondering if you were going to put more face expression paintings up on your portfolio? I do enjoy them.
 
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