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Steve
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![]() I haven't had too much time to work all the suggestions in, although I tried. I've had
some other projects at hand that have taken up a lot of my time. In any regard, tell me what you think??? ![]() ============================OLD POST Hello, I am working on a matte for a short comp. experiment. The matte is of a mosque. I would appreciate any suggestions or critiques of my work. It is a WIP... Matte Painting and BG: ![]() 3D comp. for animation ![]() Last edited by stevopolis : 04 April 2006 at 10:14 AM. Reason: update on image |
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Nothing is impossible ;)
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Yusuf Eltelpany
3D & Motion Graphic Designer
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hey man .. it's so greet ...
can you put the original photo ? |
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local dude
Steve
USA
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original image
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03 March 2006 | |
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Jaime Jasso
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I think you didi a good job in color correcting the photo, but you need something else, , check out your 3d model, she has a rim light in the right side , maybe a rim light or higlights in all the structures would help , and would create a really nice volume, because I think it is too flat, I'm looking forward at this matte , cheers
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Steve
USA
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Jaime,
That is a really good point. I will definitely add some rim light. Maybe some light from a moon peaking through the clouds. Should I add the moon peaking through a bit? Also, does the 3D element (woman) integrate currently? It seems wierd to me, but I've looked at it too long... Thanks, Steve |
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Cliff Berry
2d/ 3d Matte Painter
Blurred Pixels
Phoenix,
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I don't know about the moon peaking from the clouds but it looks like moonlight try just adding the moon first, good work so far.
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04 April 2006 | |
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Steve
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It's J3 not Jill
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John Hugens
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Suwanee,
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I find it a bit odd how the snow is so bright in front of her face, but barely noticable anywhere else. Good work,
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04 April 2006 | |
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Steve
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JIII, that is a good point about the snow, and I think I fixed the issue. It was an alpha
or transparency issue within the comp.. Hopefully I've fixed the issue, and it looks okay now? ![]() |
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It's J3 not Jill
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John Hugens
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Suwanee,
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Yeah fixed, next you should try putting a real girl's head in there :-).
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Jaime Jasso
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hey it 's looking better but here are some points you have to take care
1: the rim light can be more intense 2: I don;t see snow in the domes , the architecture or on the trees. as acumulated in the ground 3: when you have a depth of field at night the lights don't look just blurred there is a effects in the lights that make them look brighter and with a hexagon or circle shape, this is because you have a focal node just in the foreground like this examples below ![]() ![]() __________________
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mark alvia
North Hollywood,
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![]() interesting work....................
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Steve
USA
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Great point jamesvfx. I think lighting effects are needed. Since this is an animation, the
halo effects should probably be added in as a 3D element or comp 2D trick. So they move with the camera and react to lens changes. This is a good suggestion and will suggest moisture in the air. Good point on the rim lighting. Increasing the rim lighting will make the piece more dynamic. I'm a bit busy with other things, but I will update you when I make the changes ![]() Thanks for the suggestions... |
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Avid Learner
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Cliff Berry
2d/ 3d Matte Painter
Blurred Pixels
Phoenix,
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Now that I think about it though, If it's snowing there probably should be more clouds, though it does seem to work in my eye so far.
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04 April 2006 | |
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Steve
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update to first post with updated image... tell me what you think???
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