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Old 03-24-2006, 02:44 PM   #1
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flying vehicle in forest

I needed to create a "dream vehicle". I made a a flying hotrod to let some little aliens cruise around in the forsest in. Photoshop and 2 main sources of a motorcycle and a forest which i rearranged.
http://mythinglink.ubiquitysoft.com.../h/taualpha.jpg

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Old 03-24-2006, 06:46 PM   #2
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Gotcha covered:

Look at the formatting toolbar. There is a little yellow square (with brown mountains and a dot) to the left of the # symbol. Click it and then put the url for your image in the dialog box that pops up. Click okay. We should then be able to see your picture in the thread.

Like this
(this is solipsismís picture, not mine):

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As for comments, I think the light on the vehicle is hard as if in bright daylight, but the light in the forest is soft and diffused. Basically, it looks like two pictures pasted together. As separate paintings they are really good. I like both styles.
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Old 03-25-2006, 10:50 PM   #3
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Hi!
I like the flying vehicule design...but be careful, I think you have done a copy/paste of the wing tip at the right bottom, and there something that don't satisfy me, perhaps it makes a curious perspective. The wing tip at the foreground should be a bit bigger...
Some comments about the mix beetween background and ship:I agree with JTD about lighting,...perhaps some tree reflections or blurry shadows on the machine could help you.
Anyway, a good design, try something and it will be perfect
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