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Old 03-19-2006, 05:06 PM   #1
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water demon

I have worked on this old pic of mine some while now, becuased i liked the colors. So now I'm comming somwhere with it I think.
I'm not shure about her right hand, maybe I'll do it like a dark shadow hand instead.













and... the older version:
 
Old 03-19-2006, 07:16 PM   #2
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I really like this piece. It's hard for me to give you any advice because it's so twisted, lol in a good way. I hope you show us an update soon. Lovely work.
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Old 03-21-2006, 06:37 PM   #3
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update!


and thank you for the comment
 
Old 03-21-2006, 07:08 PM   #4
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I love this, the new positioning of the face is definitely better.
But the whole thing is just emitting so much emotion, i dunno, i love it
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Old 03-21-2006, 08:15 PM   #5
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a zoom in on the face:


and thanks aldog now i got some more energy to work some more on it today.
 
Old 03-21-2006, 09:12 PM   #6
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Wow! Yaaahy this is awesome, great mood!
 
Old 03-21-2006, 11:03 PM   #7
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that looks so good close up
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especially the nipple *giggles*
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Old 03-22-2006, 12:47 AM   #8
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neato... good image, cant wait so see the progress!
 
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I love colors but I think that her face / head position has got a wrong position compared to neck and breast.
 
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thanks cyborg JA - something is strange about the neck really, maybe i'll figure it out, but it's hard to change things when you have come this far, but i will try ^^ , thanks for the advice! really apreciated
 
Old 03-22-2006, 12:41 PM   #11
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you´re image is great, especially your last version has lots of character and mood. Hope you´ll find the energy for the little tweaks...

Keep posting pls...
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I think with what cyborgJA said, The head just needs to be moved to the left. the position is good but it looks to be too far from the neck
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