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  03 March 2006
The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: Paweł Hordyniak

Paweł Hordyniak is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page

Latest Update: Line Art: Im not convinced as this teddybear
 
  03 March 2006
Concept Sketch: we are going to be late



Hi. I wish everyone great time during challenge.
 
  03 March 2006
Hey.. cool sketch. Are those two characters trying to catch the boat? It feels like their moving towards the left side rather towards the boat, if that's the case. Maybe you could flip them? I know is still a draft sketch but something to have in mind during the development. Good luck!!
 
  03 March 2006
Concept Sketch: only teddybear not convinced



'Come on it can be the last journey in our life' :D cruel
 
  03 March 2006
Some cute sketches Pawlack!

Good luck to you on this Journey..
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  03 March 2006
write "Titanic" more clearly so everyone will get the hint
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  03 March 2006
Also make it 3 point perspective etc. so it will really give indication of scale and vastness to your pic and make it more dramatic. Crop the left side off altogether if necessary.
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  03 March 2006
Good sketching! Maybe try another angle closer to the feet of one of the adults
to emphasise size differences? It's early, I'm just trying to spark new ideas for ya.
Thanks for the feedback on my concept sketch. Good success on this!
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  03 March 2006
I think every technical point were said...

so, just a word to say I really like the concept, even if all action is on the very left side of picture...

Waiting first color drafts impatiently, they will completly change perception of the idea !!!

Good luck !
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  03 March 2006
I like the way you have exaggerated the adult character next to the children to make them seem ever smaller. It really helps add to the immensity of the Titanic next to them. Best of luck to you in the challenge!

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  03 March 2006
Concept Sketch: this way



Thank you all for comments. I try to stick to advices ;)

 
  03 March 2006
I discover happily your Titanic illustration, and I like the mix between humor/tragedy revealed in your project of illustration. The realize is awesome.Good luck !
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  03 March 2006
Line Art: I hope this journey will be exciting



All C&C are welcome :)
 
  03 March 2006
Hi Pawel
This concept looks realy great!
Good luck
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  03 March 2006
Hey there great update! I like what you did with the scene, moving the Titanic more toward the center helps balance it more. It is just my opinion but it feels like you have lost some of the effect you had showing the immensity of the ship though. Just my two cents. Keep up the good work!




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