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Old 03 March 2006   #1
The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: Ponlawut Ukrisana

Ponlawut Ukrisana is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page

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Old 03 March 2006   #2
Concept Sketch: Inspired by another world,



When eyes were closed, begins the journey of mind through a door to another world.
 
Old 03 March 2006   #3
Cool. Nice concept and layout. I'm curious to see the progress of this. I'll be checking out!!
 
Old 03 March 2006   #4
Hi there,

Cool looking concept, I'm looking forward to seeing more.

Matt
 
Old 03 March 2006   #5
Smile

Thank you for complementary,but i need comment to improve my work.Looking forward to hear your comment. ^_^
 
Old 03 March 2006   #6
Cool good idea

good idea man!
I'm waiting for more... .. .
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Old 03 March 2006   #7
Thumbs up good luck

good luck mate

nice idea
 
Old 03 March 2006   #8
Concept Sketch: The another world



This's sketch,i try to find composition for support my concept.I'm looking foward to hear your comment. ^_^"......
 
Old 03 March 2006   #9
Another good sketch but I really like the depth of the first sketch.. having the sleeping character in the foreground and the girl and birds behind gives it motion and a feels more like the begining of a journey. The latest one has a horizontal motion that doesn't show the depth and transition of the journey as good. However, I really prefer the girl on the right of your latest one. Maybe you could work on a combination of both sketches. keep it up!
 
Old 03 March 2006   #10
mmm...i like the idea of the second one but the composition of the first colourful one is a lot better...

oh and im lov'n the birds..

cant wait to see what you settle on..

CYB
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Old 03 March 2006   #11
sawasdee krub.nice to meet you. cool journey.i love it.ur drawing is really awesome.can't wait to see how you fix the composition.i have no crit for now.great start.
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Old 03 March 2006   #12
Dramatic perspective

The coloured sketch captures the focus of the characters better than the split cell sketch.

The half/half image doesn't draw enough focus or attention as it is split between both characters. Perhaps there's a better way of dividing the image with a sense of perspective - as achieved in the coloured sketch?
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Old 03 March 2006   #13
I love the second one with the water running over the bedsheet/dress of the two characters. However, the second one doesnít convey as much as a journey beginning as the first. It's more like a "lost dreams" kind of look. Great compositions though.
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Old 03 March 2006   #14
Smile

Thank you for every comments and ideas,I hope to find good composition for support my concept and finish before deadline ^_^"
 
Old 03 March 2006   #15
I like the idea, I would work on the transition between the "real" world and the "dream" world so that it does not look like to separate paintings sitting next to each other. I do understand that in a concept drawing you may not be to that point, but my suggestion is more for as you move along in your process. Anyway, good luck and enjoy.
 
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