The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: kanokporn mahaek

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Welcome Kanokporn, and good luck with ur entry!

My first sketch start in Illustator, I love oriental style... : )

My first sketch start in Illustator, I love oriental style... : )


Hi, below : )

My first sketch start in Illustator, I love oriental style... : )


Hi, below : )

Oh, Sorry ....That's press more one....

hey good luck my friend!

Hi there,


seems to me this will be a unique piece in this challenge - keep going

love this style.. keep it up looking good so far

Hey Kanokporn, this image has a lot of potential...also very much like what you described as the 'oriental sytle.' Maybe the image is in it's early stages, but, for positive criticism I would suggest working more with the oval yellow background...it is a very unusual daunting color to view...perhaps more detail in the background, even rendered in shades of yellow, would break it up, or...a darker border around the yellow? For some reason the yellow of the background seems to fade into the white of the page. Altogether very positive though...looking forward to seeing how you think this through. --One more thing, it is (very) hard to see what the character is doing with her arms...where they are even in relation to her shoulders. That's not really much of a problem though...only came to mind upon further inspection. Good luck. --Okay, I hope you don't take yet another positive criticism the wrong way, but, it is difficult to interpret a sense of journey from this image...? --It IS a beautiful image though.

Good luck na krub

Frist fist pretty good.
She shock me out.

The children to go for a walk with a dragon deity.

very interesting... unique wonderfulllll ... keep it up

This is some character.
Thank you very much for every single comment.
I'll use them to improve my work for sure.