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Frequenter
 kanokporn mahaek
Graphic Designer
Thonburi,
Thailand
Join Date: Jul 2005
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The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: kanokporn mahaek
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 Bobby Chiu
Concept Artist
www.imaginismstudios.com
Toronto,
Canada
Join Date: Aug 2003
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hey good luck my friend!
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03 March 2006
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Hey Kanokporn, this image has a lot of potential...also very much like what you described as the 'oriental sytle.' Maybe the image is in it's early stages, but, for positive criticism I would suggest working more with the oval yellow background...it is a very unusual daunting color to view...perhaps more detail in the background, even rendered in shades of yellow, would break it up, or...a darker border around the yellow? For some reason the yellow of the background seems to fade into the white of the page. Altogether very positive though...looking forward to seeing how you think this through. --One more thing, it is (very) hard to see what the character is doing with her arms...where they are even in relation to her shoulders. That's not really much of a problem though...only came to mind upon further inspection. Good luck. --Okay, I hope you don't take yet another positive criticism the wrong way, but, it is difficult to interpret a sense of journey from this image...? --It IS a beautiful image though.
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