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Old 02-17-2006, 03:10 AM   #1
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A Splatter of Rain

I am new to CGTalk and digital painting so bear with me.
I didnt feel the image was refined enough for the Gallery Forum so I have posted it here.
Image I created for a small competition over at DeviantArt.
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Old 02-17-2006, 03:44 AM   #2
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Very neat piece, lots of great action. It's just way way too hard to seperate what's what. Some atmospheric perspective will help settle the background into the distance.
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Old 02-17-2006, 03:58 AM   #3
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Thank you.
Im afraid the image needs much more depth and a clear focal point as well. Atmospheric effects to distance things would help distinguish between things greatly.
 
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