CGTalk > More Forums > Click Here for: > Legacy - Gallery/Finished Work: 3D (archive)
Login register
  share thread « Previous Thread | Next Thread »  
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 11-28-2002, 12:34 AM   #1
pablov
El Tilin
 
pablov's Avatar
portfolio
pablo vicentin
Freelance character modeler/concept artist
m
venado tuerto, Argentina
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
Posts: 270
Send a message via ICQ to pablov Send a message via AIM to pablov Send a message via MSN to pablov Send a message via Yahoo to pablov

castle

Attached Images
File Type: jpg test02.1 copy02.jpg (47.2 KB, 1247 views)
 
Old 11-28-2002, 12:45 AM   #2
Stonepilot
I DUBbbbb
portfolio
NA NA
Seņor Artist
Infinity Ward
Los Angeles, USA
 
Join Date: Mar 2002
Posts: 324
Pretty Cool.The lighting is kinda nice. Get rid of the spotlight with the fog and the sparkles they're very distracting to the eye. In my own opinion. The placement of the hotspot is very distraticting it keeps on pulling the eye away from the model. So maybe just move the hot spot more towards the back of the model. So the it guides your eye.
 
Old 11-28-2002, 03:35 AM   #3
sixtyten
abc
blah
Australia
 
Join Date: Nov 2002
Posts: 68
your water looks dodgy. Kinda to flat or something. i dunno.
 
Old 11-28-2002, 06:23 AM   #4
srich23
maya user
 
srich23's Avatar
surfer/3d artist
 
Join Date: Aug 2002
Posts: 136
Send a message via AIM to srich23
yeah, i would try to bring the viewer attention to the excellent modeling of the castles. i also don't like the sparkle light things.
 
Old 11-28-2002, 06:41 AM   #5
lmc
Zism
Lee Zhi Wu
.: 3D Junior Animator :.
Ifw
KL, Malaysia
 
Join Date: Aug 2002
Posts: 329
Send a message via ICQ to lmc Send a message via MSN to lmc Send a message via Yahoo to lmc
Wah, nice lal....
 
Old 11-28-2002, 01:30 PM   #6
Jeffo
Mad Maxer
 
Jeffo's Avatar
Jeff Evans
Game artist
DICE
Canada
 
Join Date: May 2002
Posts: 309
Hey pablov,

cool castle and great texturing, but i agree with the others about the water, looks flat and pales in comparison to the rest of the image.
__________________
_____________________________________
Antic Entertainment Inc.

http://www.junkbattles.com
 
Old 11-28-2002, 09:43 PM   #7
TES
CG devil
 
TES's Avatar
portfolio
robin benes
Prague, Czech Republic
 
Join Date: Apr 2002
Posts: 661
Send a message via ICQ to TES Send a message via MSN to TES Send a message via Yahoo to TES

hey guy!! itīs great!!!castle and lighting is fantastic!water and background looks ,that they needs to be repaired........
 
Old 11-29-2002, 12:05 AM   #8
ThirdEye
PinealGlandOptics
 
ThirdEye's Avatar
CGSociety Member
Alberto Blasi
Architect & Graphic Designer
Milan, Italy
 
Join Date: Jun 2002
Posts: 10,241

Nice! what software and renderer?
 
Old 11-29-2002, 01:16 AM   #9
Shiny
New Member
Student
 
Join Date: Nov 2002
Posts: 26
Send a message via ICQ to Shiny
love it

gosh, that's one fine castle.. i imagine it could be one of those perfect elf castles?!
 
Old 11-29-2002, 02:06 AM   #10
Entangle
Frequenter
 
Entangle's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
Posts: 228
Send a message via AIM to Entangle
as soon as I saw it, I though Rivendell!
 
Old 11-29-2002, 06:54 AM   #11
AC_Shrike
3D Texturing Addict
Texture Artist - ReelFX, Dallas
 
Join Date: Sep 2002
Posts: 73
Send a message via ICQ to AC_Shrike
Excellent model and scene, but you have a major error with your lighting. You got the tone/colors right, but look where the sun pours from the clouds (note the volumetric beam) and then look how the light strikes your models...from a completely different location from the left. This also results in incorrect shadows, especially from the architecture shadows on the water's surface.

An excellent start to a very nice scene, otherwise. Get to it, I want to see it completed.

Peace,

Shrike
Lead Artist - Boundless
http://www.alienculture.net
__________________
Peace,

Hollan Holmes
http://www.hollanholmes.com
 
Old 11-29-2002, 09:43 PM   #12
Zastrozzi
CG Freak
 
Zastrozzi's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2002
Posts: 217
Thumbs down Nice

yay you finally got another post up five stars
 
Old 11-29-2002, 11:22 PM   #13
viper11885
Veteran
 
Join Date: Nov 2002
Posts: 73
wow, castle looks very good

but i would change the water to make it more lifelike.. it just doesn't seem to look right.. too flat...

i too agree w/ the sparkles... i think they gotta go.. it constantly catches my eye and takes it away from everything else...
 
Old 11-30-2002, 05:03 AM   #14
KOKOMO
New Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
Posts: 5
Talking

I love the castle, more pics plz
 
Old 01-13-2006, 11:00 PM   #15
CGTalk Moderation
Expert
CGTalk Forum Leader
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Posts: 1,066,478
Thread automatically closed

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.
__________________
CGTalk Policy/Legalities
Note that as CGTalk Members, you agree to the terms and conditions of using this website.
 
  share thread


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
CGSociety
Society of Digital Artists
www.cgsociety.org

Powered by vBulletin
Copyright Đ2000 - 2006,
Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Minimize Ads
Forum Jump
Miscellaneous

All times are GMT. The time now is 06:08 PM.


Powered by vBulletin
Copyright ©2000 - 2016, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.