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Old 12-13-2005, 07:50 PM   #1
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Biker Eyes, Andrea Bertaccini (3D)



Title: Biker Eyes
Name: Andrea Bertaccini
Country: Italy
Software: 3ds max, combustion, Photoshop

I have tried to reproduce the look accomplice, sweet and little aggressive of a Biker girl.
I have modeled all in 3ds Max 8, through EDIT POLY, trying to optimize the number of the polygons, the texture are realized in Photoshop, obtained from photographies, all has been postprocessed in combustion, through the escape in file .RPF, in order to obtain the DOF.
I tried to render the eyes most realistic possible, would appeal to to me to have of the opinions on the obtained result.

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Old 12-13-2005, 09:16 PM   #2
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great work ........ in modeling and texture and lightS and renderinG



allsTARS

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Old 12-13-2005, 09:27 PM   #3
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Very nice there! But the lips seem too reflective
 
Old 12-13-2005, 09:46 PM   #4
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I really love it, everything is perfect !

Small criteria - mouth seems to be a bit off, both shading and shape. Please dont get me wrong, its super. Just something to work on to improve even more

5 stars worth
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Old 12-13-2005, 10:02 PM   #5
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Congratulations!

How much time did the render take?
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Old 12-13-2005, 10:06 PM   #6
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gorgeous, maybe some parts are a bit too shiny/reflective but i just love the eyes, if only i could create such eyes...
 
Old 12-13-2005, 10:07 PM   #7
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i love it!

looks really good. modeling, texturing and rendering all look exceptional!

I can spot only two things that could improve the already stellar front-page worthy render

first, the corner of the lips appear to be too sharp to me and the shadow tone on and around the curvature going into the mouth looks a bit too black i think. Maybe a slight colouration of the black shadow to, eh say, very dark reddish/pinkish colour might improve the looks.

second, the neck. it looks a tad thin in scale(horizontally) and lacks a bit of detail.

But then again, it already looks good, so keep up the good work
 
Old 12-13-2005, 10:48 PM   #8
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Magnificent render-
i agree with the others about the lips, but have 1 other minor crit to add: the freckles on her face, whilst cute, seem a bit too uniform to be natural- almost like a stripe across her face. I'd like to see some more randomness in the texture.

Picky, i know, but i want to see this awesome render perfected.
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Old 12-13-2005, 11:02 PM   #9
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Impressive work, very very nice texturing, one of the best characters that I see in cgtalk, congratulations.
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Old 12-13-2005, 11:36 PM   #10
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Now, that's the kind of quality artwork for a frontpage.......5 stars
 
Old 12-14-2005, 12:07 AM   #11
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Looks great.. Textures are so cool.. Love it.
 
Old 12-14-2005, 12:19 AM   #12
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Wow ...

woe ... non so cos'altro dire ...

great work, the modelling and the texturing are superb ...

grande ...

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Old 12-14-2005, 12:52 AM   #13
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Wow, Fantastic!!
Show some wires please!
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Old 12-14-2005, 01:10 AM   #14
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I like the eyes best, one of the best CG eyes I'v ever seen. Lips seem too reflective. And no nosdrils? But it's an awesome job, respect !!!
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Old 12-14-2005, 01:43 AM   #15
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simply amazing stuff! Vray? Brazil render?
show us more please!!
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