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Old 10-31-2005, 01:03 PM   #1
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Saab 37 Viggen

Hi all,
I recently finished the Mig 21 Fishbed and have now stared to work on a Saab 37 Viggen. Here's a couple of Wips:







 
Old 10-31-2005, 01:26 PM   #2
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Nice modeling thier bazze.
 
Old 10-31-2005, 05:28 PM   #3
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looking good
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Old 11-01-2005, 08:26 AM   #4
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Here's an update. I've created a bump map, a diffusion map and have added some more details.

 
Old 11-02-2005, 10:31 PM   #5
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Please tell me what you think about the composition and light/shader settings. I've been staring myself blind..

 
Old 11-03-2005, 02:52 PM   #6
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Awesome!
Just decrease the strength of the bumpmap, as it's much too strong. You may get better results highlighting the panels using specular maps.
 
Old 11-03-2005, 07:44 PM   #7
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seriously, that last one looks photoreal.
KEEP IT UP.
 
Old 11-03-2005, 10:01 PM   #8
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thanks!
Here's a new version with the bump reduced. I've also re-worked the (lowpoly) pilot.



Here you see it flying:



and here's a render showing the model with a different texture applied.

 
Old 11-03-2005, 10:27 PM   #9
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Lots better! The camo one is very nice too.

Lower your glossiness a bit, cause the highlight is pretty strong, making the plane almost look wet or varnished (middle picture).
 
Old 11-04-2005, 01:47 AM   #10
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Something about the tail is bothering me. . . it seems too clean somehow. I might be mistaken though. . .

Really nice work there. You've got a lot of talent with aircraft models!
 
Old 11-04-2005, 09:19 AM   #11
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Above images updated (camo texture on the 1st picture added and glossiness reduced on the 2nd). Pls reload. I think it is finished.
 
Old 11-04-2005, 07:11 PM   #12
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Top!
 
Old 11-04-2005, 09:58 PM   #13
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Very nice bazze, I particularily like the inflight shot. Hopefully you'll do one with the camo version as well.

I really like the way you have reduced your bump maps on recent aircraft, it is much more realistic.
 
Old 11-10-2005, 07:00 PM   #14
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Great images and a great airplane
I really like the camo version, the colors appear to be very acurate.
Well done.

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Old 11-11-2005, 05:59 AM   #15
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wow

wow, looks really great man. One suggestion, if you going to put it
into an enviroment such as the flying picture, you should take into
consideration the lighting to give it an even more realistic look with
the environment

-looks great, keep it up

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