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Old 02 February 2002   #1
WIP - creature to crit . . .

Here is my latest work... before anyone ask: i used some "Star Wars" movies for reference But the creature has its own personality - i hope !!

Here is a front-view:




Here he is tired:




And some early emotions:

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Last edited by BASSit : 02 February 2002 at 06:02 PM.
 
Old 02 February 2002   #2
great work man. maybe you could ad some muscle deformation in the cheek area for the different expressions, i think he will then have a lot more expression in it.

gr. Dennis
 
Old 02 February 2002   #3
Wow. This little creature has got a lot of character. Maybe you could put eyebrows on him to emphasis his brow expressions. Heh, I can't stop staring at him.

SOMLOR
 
Old 02 February 2002   #4
Hey Bassit - this little guy is awesome. Extremely cute yet menacing too. You know, I think this guy looks like he belongs in a movie! He really is very very cool. Great work!
The only crit I can give is that I think his mouth needs a bit of work - I'm not sure what it is about it that bugs me, it just doesn't seem to look right. Otherwise, brilliant character!
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Old 02 February 2002   #5
First of all: thanks for the comments & compliments ! That gives me a lot of power to go further.

DWIEMER: I will try to add some more muscles... maybe it brings more life to him !

somlor: You could be right: the area above the eyes could really need some detail ! But i am not sure if he will loose his cutiness if i give him some bushy brows... but ill try something

Leigh: Yes, there is something wrong with that mouth... but i dont know what ! Maybe i should change the color of his lips ?!

Anyway im actually thinking about what body would fit this little thing... a two-legged human-like or a four-legged pet-body ? Any ideas or suggestions are welcome !!
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Old 02 February 2002   #6
maybe you could give him 3 legs, 2 in the front, 1 thicker leg in the back.
 
Old 02 February 2002   #7
Suggestions on the mouth: It looks like it's stuck on the head - almost like a beak.

Maybe bring the chin forward?

Maybe less of an indent under the nose?

It looks like a cat - maybe try a cat-like mouth?

Cool creature. Cute yet kinda scary. Like those little dinosaurs in Jurassic 2 that were in packs and would swarm their prey.

Again - just suggestions. I would be happy with anything near this!!
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Old 02 February 2002   #8
This one is for Rondo



Just a quick idea . . .
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Old 02 February 2002   #9
Funny!!! Cute and still scary. With the wiskers he looks like a mouse/cat hybrid genetically engineered on the x-files. Give him a furry tail with retractable claws and you'll be all set!
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Old 02 February 2002   #10
hi

its good
but you better use soft shadow
and work more on texture detail
and little fur
good luck
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Old 02 February 2002   #11
Ive played around with the lightning... thanks maya_death, for that hint...


As you can see ive completely redone the iris (much higher resolution) - i will also raise the resolution of the head-textures to add some little details

Oh, before i forgot: That furry tail and some retractable claws seems to be a great idea - i will defenitly add them Especially that fur would be a challenge for me - ive never done this before.

And here is another image:


ive worked a bit on emotions, but i need heaps of morph-targets to bring him to life.

And here is a BIG wallpaper for those who need one:
right-click here !

See ya - buddies
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Old 02 February 2002   #12
Short facial test . . .

Ive played around a bit with the 10 different morph-targets i have now (ive also animated the nose-holes). Maybe you want to have a look at it ?

Click here for the 30 second clip !

Its encoded with DivX !
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Old 02 February 2002   #13
menithings

Did you get inspiration from Menithing's, "The Freak"?

http://www.menithings.com

Kyph
 
Old 02 February 2002   #14
No, kyphur ! And the freak doesnt look cute to me... he looks strange and is not even close to my creature ! Do you need glasses - just kidding
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Old 02 February 2002   #15
Ive made a blocky body for this creature... thats the shape he should look like !



It would be great to get some comments because its the second human-like body ive ever created , so i really need some critique.

Thanks & have a nice day !
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