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  11 November 2002
head crits needed Please

Female heads seem to be my biggest challenge very delicate this will go on a practice model i psted in a earleir thread it will replace the first as i didnt like the results im happier with this but still a wip and could use some advice or opinions if anyone would care to crit the ! so far just the face and head are complete ears and neck next
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  11 November 2002
You've really captured a feminine look to her, well done.

I think the 3/4 view needs some work though. Front and side look great. I'd pull the cheeks out just a little, so she doesn't look too anorexic, and slightly widen the front of the jaw.

And watch those nascent horns. Pull the side points of the top of her forehead in a bit.

jonny
 
  11 November 2002
Ears are a tad small,, other than that,,, I'm in love with her
 
  11 November 2002
Cool ...
Great neck details ... I don't think that u need to tweak some thing (depending on this pics ) Can u post bigger one (more close up) ?
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Last edited by Eugeny : 11 November 2002 at 08:28 AM.
 
  11 November 2002
Nice model, really.

Keep on.
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  11 November 2002
huh,..wait an f*n minute! That bar on the bottom of the interface,...Is that the stock L7.5 interface? what the hell?
 
  11 November 2002
Nice Model Keep updating.
Maybe you should change a little the bottom lips corner.
Great anyway!
 
  11 November 2002
Thanks all !


Kretin I agre was thinking she was looking rather thin myself ill get on that i softened the neck a lil casue i think that was contributing to the thin look


eugeny sorry bout the small pic i have to use atachments as i cant update my 3d luvr site at the moment (too bad need to get rid of the crap on it ) heres a single view a lil bigger


The ears are still bieng worked on and they are alot of fun to atach really i mean they are fun!
 
  11 November 2002
their neck muscles are too evident... you're not so contracted in a natural position
 
  11 November 2002
Looks pretty good to me. If I had to make some crits I'd recommend taking a look at the side view where the lower chin transitions to the neck. It seems a bit too cut (or sharp) giving a rather too muscular or athletic look especially given the well defined and sharp edged jaw line. The lower cheeks (the hollow of the cheeks) also appear a little too thin and might look a bit healthier if they were given a just a slight bit more meat.

Of course if that was the effect you were going for then fawgedabout all my nit picking and proceed on to the hair and make up department.

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  11 November 2002
LOL all nitpicking welcome ! it helps me to see what to focus on the most i agree with both comments the neck is to tense looking agian ill soften it and tweek the cheeks though i do want to keep the jawline rather defned but it could be looked at thanks guys
 
  11 November 2002
Quote: Originally posted by smfjersey
huh,..wait an f*n minute! That bar on the bottom of the interface,...Is that the stock L7.5 interface? what the hell?


I'm with you....what the hell.....?
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  11 November 2002
Yes sorry missed that the bar is something i customize depending on what im modeling its in your menu set up normaly i use my mouse and 4 keys on the keybard eveything else (tools linked to my mouse about 14 keys i think i just put the few i use very seldom on the bottom bar when im lazy !
 
  11 November 2002
Ok took some of the suggestions and applied them in small amounts heres a lil more developed look of her just added unfineshed headress and starting body (trying to avoid finishing ears LOL )
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