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Old 09-09-2005, 06:46 AM   #1
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New animation

Here's a link to an animation I'm working on in class. Wouldn't post it if I didn't want feedback.

Thank ya.

Here's a higher quality vid
almostfinal2.mov

And a lower quality one
amigos.swf

Please enjoy!
Sug

By the way, I'm not sure how this gigashare thing is gonna work. Let me know if it sucks and I'll try to find another way to get it online.
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Old 09-10-2005, 02:58 AM   #2
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There's a point about 20% into the clip where the character jerks his head up--that's too quick. Also, about sixty percent through, he slaps the table with both hands; it looks like he's preparing to jump, not slap the table. I'd put a little more emphasis on slapping the table.

Otherwise, I like it--nice character development. What exactly is he ranting about, though?
 
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First off, you have to go rent Three Amigos! Go now... I can't believe so many people have asked me what movie the clip is from. It is such a classic.

Animation wise, thanks for the crit. I don't like that head movement either. Also the hand slap is pretty much just a quick movement I did to block in the rest of the animation. So I totally plan on ironing out that part a bit more. I didn't notice that it looked like he was getting ready to jump, but I'll look into changing that a bit.

Thanks again.
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