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  11 November 2002
Awkward Moments - Restroom - mucky wet noodle

Hola amigos,
Here's to toilets.

Click the images for a larger one, too many of the lil' jerks to post the bigs.




got to split this up....
 
  11 November 2002


Definitely toss any feedback or ideas, or if you think something is... ahem ... crap.

-ps-I've still got to time the acting with a stopwatch but I think I have to cut the trash can part to fit within 15 seconds.

Last edited by muckywetnoodle : 11 November 2002 at 05:39 AM.
 
  11 November 2002
I had camera cuts and that bit was too long so I did this one. I have to do a couple character sketches and build them but it shouldn't take long.

click here or image for animatic
 
  11 November 2002
wasn't too happy with that last storyboard either so I have another idea I am going with. I'll post a storyboard soon.

Here's the character for it:
 
  11 November 2002
heheh.. I like your character. He reminds of those little punk freak pygmy things that run around and twitch and foam and stuff in that game Alice ... but nobody ever seems to remember them
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  11 November 2002
Good to see ya in Eric. Cool character btw.
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  11 November 2002
somlor-thanks. I know which guys you mean. I'd guess John's the breadwinner in the family while they just crawl around. I might have to fatten him up a bit so his limbs will be visible at 320x240.

rendermonkey23-thanks. Glad you like him!

Here's a revised storyboard
 
  11 November 2002
I'm just working on his key poses and timing. Please let me know if you have any crits or suggestions. Not really any inbetweens yet.
Animation test 1009k Divx

Animation test 600k zipped QT

thank you!

Last edited by muckywetnoodle : 11 November 2002 at 08:52 PM.
 
  11 November 2002
I just added some in-betweens. The last couple seconds I decided to act out differently so they are extra ugly. That'll change though. Please let me know if you have any crits and suggestions.

Second go, 2.5MB zipped QT

Thanks!
E
 
  12 December 2002
Hey there!

I like the character, but I can't really tell what's going on with the animation. Obviously the guy pees himself, but other than walking up to the urinal I can't figure out what he's doing. Is his zipper stuck? Is the urinal broken? I think the blocking needs to be much clearer to be read well.

Let's see the next version!

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  12 December 2002
Late but done!


Animation: 831k Divx

Animation: 2.1MB QT

If anyone has some time to give some crits or comments, please do. I'm much more interested in feedback than the contest part. I'll be doing the same.

I redid this from scratch so hopefully it's reading better.

Congrats to everyone that finished on time!

good work,
E
 
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