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Old 08 August 2005   #1
hey everyone!! Newbie!!! updated part 2

hey y'all,

this is my first time post on this forum!! i thought i would share my latest piece. its slated for a homage of a comicbook called wondercity. this is just the ruff and i will eventually clean it up and color........ hopefully!!


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Old 08 August 2005   #2
My eyes get strained if I try to look at this too long, but not because it's bad drawing. It's because of the compostition. It's real hard to distingusih what's part of what, and your eye doesn't just flow over it. I wish I had a good composition tutorial. Maybe someone else does.
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Old 08 August 2005   #3
I think it's the zebra lines.

I fyou colour it wisely, not too bright on the zebra girl I bet it'll turn out great. Very ncie and consistent style.

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Old 08 August 2005   #4
Hi!
Yes I think the lion-ish girl in the front should be darker to get some contrast!
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Old 08 August 2005   #5
Hi there!
Hmm I wonder why my last post didn´t show up here...
Anyway:
You should give the picture some contrast, so one knows what´s in front and what´s behind.
Additionally I would darken the lion-ish girl in front

greetz
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Old 09 September 2005   #6
thanks Y'all!!!

here is the cleaned up version!! soon to be colored!!!
 
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