Abandoned (goblin's house!)

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Old 08 August 2005   #1
Abandoned (goblin's house!)

Alrite, I wanted to show you this piece I've started on.. I'd like to hear comments and critics, suggestions and how to make it further, ideas.. Everything.

It's about a story of a few goblinhunters that has abandoned their building and then the goblins have found it and made it their house.

Old 08 August 2005   #2
oooh! i just gotta say i LOVE the colours, the little circles of light on the ground and the house, and the purple flowers. makes me think of some adorable goblins living there, though and is the prelimiary grass, the Photoshop brush? hehe.

can't wait to see where this goes!
Old 08 August 2005   #3
Yes, thanks Alexandrite! And yes, I thought the goblins could be a nice race but for some reason the humen just don't like them. They're "not normal". I saw these colors in my head before I knew what I'm gonna do with them. I'm quite satisfied with the sketch so far. And hehe yes, it's the Photoshop default grass brush, but that's just for the sketch. I'm gonna make the hay/grass more detailed too as I detail it further. Make some little flowers and plants here and there.

Any ideas if the dark bg needs something in it so it would seem like the bg doesn't end to the wall seen from the building.. ?
Old 08 August 2005   #4
I really like the creepy atmosphere you've captured as well as the colors. The lanterns are a very nice touch. I like the bg as it is, there's something about that darkness behind the house that makes it even more eerie to me. Still maybe you could add a hint of tall dry grass or the outline of a gnarled tree or two, or barbed wire fencing.
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Old 08 August 2005   #5
Umm.. Maybe it's my bad english or something, but I don't get this, Samanthie: "a hint of tall dry grass or the outline of a gnarled tree or two". What do you mean?

But thanks for your comments anyhow. And barbed wire could be cool.. Have to think of that.
Old 08 August 2005   #6
Hi Erikoinen, What I meant by hint is like just a very faint outline of trees. I can see you do have trees in the background. Fault of my monitor that I couldn't see them yesterday..sorry about that. By gnarled I am referring to something twisted or curved..like an old oak tree might be.
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Old 08 August 2005   #7
Ye Samanthie, that's what I was gonna do anyways. So that's good hint, I guess.
I had a one day break since I was baby sitting (groovy..) and today I think I'm gonna post another update.
Old 08 August 2005   #8
Ohrite, update. I'm kind of disappointed how less I can do in such a long time (about 4-5 hours). So here's the result, just pretty much detailed the wall.

Old 08 August 2005   #9
Just wanted to say how nice this seems to be turning out. The lighting is really atmospheric (hope spelling is right) and the texturing of the wood on the house looks amazing, must have taken quite a while to do. I know you said that it has been abandoned and now goblins have moved in, i was just wondering how you are going to suggest this in the peice because at the moment there isn't anything there to suggest that there is anyone living in it apart from the lanterns i guess? Anyway i look forward to seeing how this develops further.
Old 08 August 2005   #10
Well, umm hrm.. I was thinking maybe adding some magical effects inside the house, not well seen tho, so it seems the goblins are inside cooking their spiritual stuff or something.
Or maybe the lanterns and the stamped grass that I'm gonna do are enough to tell that there are something living in the house? Maybe I'm gonna do some details to it, like a log pile for their fire making purposes or making new structure.. Advices are very welcome!
Old 08 August 2005   #11

This looks fantastic!
The only thing I notice is, I'm missing something at the upper part of the image..maybe like.. a big tree branch could be coming down and framing the area where you want us to look.
Old 08 August 2005   #12
MarieL, you're right, it's way too dark for the upper part. I'm definitely going to do something to it so it doesn't look like I just didn't want to paint it. Thanks for your kind words.
Old 08 August 2005   #13
Little update, not been so active with this. :/

Any advices are really welcome!

If someone doesn't know/wants to know how I made those tree barks I've got this lil' image for you (sorry for it being so dark, for some reason when I save as jpg in photoshop it makes the pic like 10% darker, dunno why):

Last edited by Erikoinen : 08 August 2005 at 08:23 PM.
Old 08 August 2005   #14
Love is in the air.. Nanana.

Old 08 August 2005   #15
Gimme somthin', doods!
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