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Old 08-03-2005, 07:37 AM   #1
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Talking luffey

okey i just started a new model...here is somme preview..more to comme later...im going to sleep right now!



 
Old 08-03-2005, 10:55 AM   #2
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Okay, it's a very nice little model you've got there, but I've got a few crits:
the nose looks a bit too disconnected, and the little divider between the nostril thing goes down too far--these could just be style, though.

Also, there's something SERIOUSLY wrong with the dude's ears--though you may just not have gotten to that yet.
 
Old 08-09-2005, 05:54 AM   #3
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Talking wire+

here i finaly find the time to start the body





this is fun^^
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Old 08-09-2005, 07:33 AM   #4
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The eyes look too far apart, the head should be 5 eyes wide.
 
Old 08-09-2005, 02:32 PM   #5
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Luffey? As in Luffey from "One Piece"? I don't follow the manga, but i do watch the cartoon. If it is Luffey from One Piece, then maybe you should think about taking away most of if not all of the muscle bulk. The model gives the impression of an adult, and not a child...But then for all i know that's what he looks like now in the mangas, or maybe that is simply the name of you character. If this is so, then plainly ignore my post. Thank you come again.
 
Old 08-09-2005, 06:42 PM   #6
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Hey, another one from you. You certainly do lots of projects at the same time. I'm already starting to recognize your style. Other than what's already been mentioned, I noticed that all of your models use the same "global smoothing". You may want to use different smoothing groups in Max(even if it's temp) to help you see the volumes of what you are modeling. In particular, it's hard to shape the ear with the smoothing on, because you don't get a feel of where the verts should be.

Nice project though. You love modeling anime characters.
 
Old 08-09-2005, 09:43 PM   #7
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Luffey? As in Luffey from "One Piece"? I don't follow the manga, but i do watch the cartoon. If it is Luffey from One Piece, then maybe you should think about taking away most of if not all of the muscle bulk. The model gives the impression of an adult, and not a child...But then for all i know that's what he looks like now in the mangas, or maybe that is simply the name of you character. If this is so, then plainly ignore my post. Thank you come again.


he has the hat it must be luffey!! I wanna c sum1 model Zorro(r what ever the renamed him in the american crap version)
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Old 08-10-2005, 03:25 PM   #8
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Talking explanation!^^

okey guy it is not exactly lufey..i know he look a little bit alike but its because i got inspired by one piece..and now i am trying to do a more athletique version of him!!

d2king10: tanks it is someting i should remember but i dont realy need this for this model.. because im trying to do someting more anime than realistic!
 
Old 08-12-2005, 02:34 AM   #9
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okey i just started the cloth here how its looking yet ..plus some wire frame..plus the back^^







critique always welcome^^
 
Old 08-12-2005, 02:41 AM   #10
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if you want him to look anatomically correct i suggest re-do the head
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johnyII: na its corect..its exactly what i dont need^^ he is not suposed to be because he is a anime character..eny way i know he ase to big eye..and a to litle nose...^^
 
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Now That is one sexy lower back.
 
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