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Old 06 June 2005   #1
Game menu

Newest version:

An in-game menu.


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Last edited by marc001 : 09 September 2005 at 07:50 PM.
 
Old 06 June 2005   #2
In what kind of style is your game supposed to be? Now it looks abit rounded of with not much detail.
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Old 06 June 2005   #3
Can't say much about the apple farm graphic, as for the window itself..it looks real good, gives off a balders gate kinda feel. explain the purposes of the icons and what they are meant to do. It would be neat to see what you have cooked up for such a menu.
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Old 06 June 2005   #4
The drop shadow is overdone, I think, it make the presentation feel rather dark and fuzzy. The marble texture doesn't fit when it is applied to those thin, beveled tabs, it seems very out of place. I would either redesign the tabs to fit the material or come up with a different material to apply to most of your frame. Simple is good; a rather plain background might work better than that busy marble, and you could simply add little highlights like bolts or rivets in the corner. When you're using the bevel layer effect, you may have more success with less extreme shadows and highlights, and I would experiment with tinting the shadow and highlight colors away from pure white and pure black.

Overall I think it is too busy, and too "photoshop".
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Old 06 June 2005   #5
fairly terrible. LOL. but there is hope. The placement and organization is good, but everything else is over done, too big, too busy, and too many filters.

First of all the viewing area i assume is the game window is only about 15-20% of the screen. You should push to make your game window as large as possible. People dont want to look at your menus, they want to see the world. Try and limit your menus to about 15-20% of the screen. Hopefully less.

Cut down the size of everything. Your fruit could be 1/5 that size and still be recognisable. Your icons at the bottom could be 1/5 the size as well. The Title at top needs to be made as small as possible if not removed because it seems to be the title of the game and its un-nessisary to remind the player what game they are playing.

as for the style, way over done. Less is more. Your boarders are too thick, they have overpowering shadows (you should just drop the shadows completely) and your gold boarders are too loud.

My best suggestion would be to look at menus from The sims 2. Take a look at how simple and MINIMAL the boarders, and menus are. They have only 2 or 3 colors, very thin linework, and very SMALL icons.

your icons are very good though. I can clearly understand how to play this game just by looking at the buttons. Their just too big.

good luck with it!
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Old 06 June 2005   #6
Things changed:
1. removed marble
2. tinted shadows blue
3. enlarged illustration window
4. reduced icon size
5. new buttons

Originally Posted by Blackgeni: In what kind of style is your game supposed to be? Now it looks abit rounded of with not much detail.

A strategy game. The low detail items are just place holders until the finished items are done.
Originally Posted by Wayne Adams: explain the purposes of the icons and what they are meant to do. It would be neat to see what you have cooked up for such a menu.

The fruit icons on the left are for the type of farm. The bottom ones are: farmers, farming tools, and fruit. The x in the upper right corner is for closing the UI.
Originally Posted by Adam Atomic: The drop shadow is overdone, I think, it make the presentation feel rather dark and fuzzy. The marble texture doesn't fit when it is applied to those thin, beveled tabs, it seems very out of place. I would either redesign the tabs to fit the material or come up with a different material to apply to most of your frame. Simple is good; a rather plain background might work better than that busy marble, and you could simply add little highlights like bolts or rivets in the corner. When you're using the bevel layer effect, you may have more success with less extreme shadows and highlights, and I would experiment with tinting the shadow and highlight colors away from pure white and pure black.

Drop shadow distance is reduced to 1 pixel. The tabs are now round buttons, and the folders overlap. Now the selected folder and tab overlap the folders underneath. Overall the opacity for the shadows and highlights have been reduced. The shadows are now blue instead of black.
Originally Posted by CodeNothing: fairly terrible. LOL. but there is hope. The placement and organization is good, but everything else is over done, too big, too busy, and too many filters.

First of all the viewing area i assume is the game window is only about 15-20% of the screen. You should push to make your game window as large as possible. People dont want to look at your menus, they want to see the world. Try and limit your menus to about 15-20% of the screen. Hopefully less.

Cut down the size of everything. Your fruit could be 1/5 that size and still be recognisable. Your icons at the bottom could be 1/5 the size as well. The Title at top needs to be made as small as possible if not removed because it seems to be the title of the game and its un-nessisary to remind the player what game they are playing.

as for the style, way over done. Less is more. Your boarders are too thick, they have overpowering shadows (you should just drop the shadows completely) and your gold boarders are too loud.

My best suggestion would be to look at menus from The sims 2. Take a look at how simple and MINIMAL the boarders, and menus are. They have only 2 or 3 colors, very thin linework, and very SMALL icons.

your icons are very good though. I can clearly understand how to play this game just by looking at the buttons. Their just too big.

good luck with it!

What appears to be the game window is an illustration window. The illustration window is bigger and everything else smaller. The border thickness is now thinner. The color in the borders is less staturated. Instead of Sims 2, it's more like a menu in Tropico 2, or a similar strategy game. Clicking on a button on the main UI should open another floating UI on top of the game.

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Old 06 June 2005   #7
Things changed:
1. Changed images on side buttons
2. Reduced overlap on buttons
3. Colored bottom buttons
4. Added gradient sky to illustration
5. Added grass hills to illustration
5. Modeled and textured new farm.

The side button images are still place holders and will be replaced by 3D rendered versions based on these images.

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Old 06 June 2005   #8
you need soemthing in the gray area
 
Old 06 June 2005   #9
The real fruit pictures seem too busy, It's destracting When it comes to the page tab. With the simplistic fruit, you can clearly see what page you are on. But the busyness of the pics with the fruit pictures makes it dificult to make out. Iether change it to a simpler pic, or do something with the realistic ones (like slighty enlarge the tab and pull it more out of line with the other tabs.) to make it more distinguised on what page you are on.
 
Old 06 June 2005   #10
Why not try making the images for the tabs not currently selected black and white, and only the current one in color? Have you also got any plans for rollovers or anything other forms of highlighting? I also agree that some of the gray areas could do with some texture to them, perhaps just a gradient? Finally, I think you should tone down sone of the drop shadows on the fonts, they make it look a little unprofessional.

Hope some of that is useful to you!
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Old 06 June 2005   #11
Huge Improvement!
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Old 07 July 2005   #12


Things changed:
1. Changed foreground grass from green to yellow
2. Added windows to farm structure
3. Added apple trees
4. Added a gaussian blurred version of the image on top, and screened it at a lower opacity.
5. Added lens flare

The illustration was falling behind everything else and needed more work.

Originally Posted by mrkill1221: you need soemthing in the gray area

Agreed. It's on the "to do" list. There will be a faint stone texture in the grey in a future version.

Originally Posted by Shadow Slayer: The real fruit pictures seem too busy, It's destracting When it comes to the page tab. With the simplistic fruit, you can clearly see what page you are on. But the busyness of the pics with the fruit pictures makes it dificult to make out. Iether change it to a simpler pic, or do something with the realistic ones (like slighty enlarge the tab and pull it more out of line with the other tabs.) to make it more distinguised on what page you are on.

The buttons in a future version will have a 3D rendered version attached to it's coresponding tree on a gradient background. Also the folder will have more overlap, a half way point between the previous version, and the one before it.

Originally Posted by beeglebug: Why not try making the images for the tabs not currently selected black and white, and only the current one in color? Have you also got any plans for rollovers or anything other forms of highlighting? I also agree that some of the gray areas could do with some texture to them, perhaps just a gradient? Finally, I think you should tone down sone of the drop shadows on the fonts, they make it look a little unprofessional.

Hope some of that is useful to you!

The unselected tabs need to be in color. No rollovers or hightlighting for now. In a future update the text will sit on top of a banner. Depending on how it looks, the drop shadow may, or may not need the opacity changed.

Originally Posted by CodeNothing: Huge Improvement!

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Last edited by marc001 : 07 July 2005 at 10:09 AM.
 
Old 07 July 2005   #13
I think those little tabs should break from the border of the menu, like all the gray area, just kill, and let them hang, it would break up the box outline, and thats usually a good thing.
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Old 07 July 2005   #14
new ver is beter, .. do anather new .
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Old 07 July 2005   #15


Things changed:
1. Reduced shadows in foreground grass
2. Added door to farm
3. Added stone texture to folder
4. Fixed tab overlaps
5. Darkened rear tabs
6. Adjusted spacing around illustration, and text windows
7. Added banner to "Fruit Farms" text
8. Color corrected tree trunks from green to brown
9. Darkened apples on the trees
10. Darkened colors of bottom buttons

Originally Posted by Wayne Adams: I think those little tabs should break from the border of the menu, like all the gray area, just kill, and let them hang, it would break up the box outline, and thats usually a good thing.

Added seperation between the buttons and the windows. The plain grey wont be there, so the menu will be a floating UI that the user will pull up during the game.

Originally Posted by kurt_hectic_pl: new ver is beter, .. do anather new

Here's the new one. I aim to make better versions with each update.
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