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  05 May 2005

So basically this is something im working on...but it seems to be missing something. so im stuck right now on what exactly i can add to this to improve it
Any c and c would be greatly appreciated, thanks

heres the original B & W

and then i went in and added some colors
heres a bigger version
  05 May 2005
Cool......really intense man. Love it!!!

How much colour are you going to put in? Looks fine with me now, maybe just detailing would be better.
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  05 May 2005
Man, this style is so cool! I'm trying myself to do shading like that but I never seem to get it right :/
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  05 May 2005
It's hard to give crits on this, because it is so artistic, and I don't feel competent to judge art on those levels. =P

However, I really like what you've done here. It is so raw and intenese, that it could almost reach out and put a mark on the beholder. I feel like I can really connect to this.

One thing I liked better with the B/W version, is that the hand in front of the chest stands out more - in the color version it "vanishes" a bit. I feel that the black hands are key in bringing value and impact to the artwork (just my personal reflection).
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  05 May 2005
yeah...i see what you guys are saying, but it seems to still bother me. im trying to change the style of it all together. But yeah, i liked the hand in the center and i see what you mean when you said it sort of lost its effect when it the red was added

im thinking of going more towards a style like this one, i basically borrowed the style idea from a drawing form derek hess

but i still liked most of the color in the image itself and less of the background, so i think i might keep that
  05 May 2005
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