Master and Servant 2D Entry: Kerem Beyit

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Old 03 March 2005   #1
Master and Servant 2D Entry: Kerem Beyit

Kerem Beyit has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

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Latest Update: Final Image: Final Image

So here's my Final Image. Added some last minute details. Hope you like it. Thank you all for your support so far, and good luck everybody!

And I edited my story. Here's the final story.


Jullazar was always so curious about the snow. She used to listen to the stories with a great excitement about the winter and snowing that visitors tell who come from northern lands to his father's palace. She used feel so sorry for herself thinking she will never, ever be able to see the snow because the winter wasn't a season that is given to their land. On her 16th birthday his father, who is a great great wizard, invited her to his room and, "My dear Jullazar, what can I offer you as a birthday present?" he said.

-Ah! You can send me on a journey to the beautiful north countries, Father!
-North? he said curiously.
-Oh, unfortunately this is a gift that I most certainly cannot give, Jullazar. Do you think I am that irresponsible to let my little daughter go to a dangerous journey ?
-Jabbar will come with me! He will protect me!
-Please, do not insist on that, child.
-I'm afraid this is not an arguable matter.
-But, Father..
-I won't permit you, Jullazar! he said strongly.
-Then I'll never be able to see the snow in my whole life! she yelled and went to her room crying.

As she went, her father murmured "the snow?".

In the evening, Jullazar was still so angry.Why he wouldn't let her go? It was her birthday and she was so--

But what was that? Little white drops were shining and dissappearing in front of her window. She couldn't believe her eyes! It was snowing!

She ran to the courtyard. In the courtyard Jabbar, which is her previous birthday gift,was waiting for her with an umbrella.

"Your father wishes you a long and happy life my precious mistress", Jabbar said.

Jullazar let the snow drops chill her skin by reaching her hand for the sky and started to think what could she want as her next birthday gift from her father as she was smiling.
Kerem Beyit

Last edited by kerembeyit : 05 May 2005 at 12:37 AM. Reason: Writing description
Old 03 March 2005   #2
Concept Sketch: Hamam

Hamam concept sketch.

Hey everyone.

This is my first challenge. First of all, I wish good luck to all fellow artists. I came up with few sketches still not sure about the concept, but my idea is drawing servant djinns and their mistress in an orientalist atmosphere. That's is for now.


Kerem Beyit

Last edited by kerembeyit : 03 March 2005 at 02:17 PM. Reason: Description
Old 03 March 2005   #3
Concept Sketch: hamam2

Hamam sketch 2
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Old 03 March 2005   #4
hi kerem , (guzel entry!)

I like the second sketch a lot but she doesnt look like a master in that one , she looks too submissive. A more strong pose would give the idea of master better.

Bol sans!
Old 03 March 2005   #5

Hmm I didn't want to draw a ruthless master, but I guess you're right about pose I usually don't give any attention to poses first. I just concentrate on concept... Well, actually I'm not sure about this concept, I just have to try different ideas. Thanks for the feedback bro. (Baba, bunlar ısınma turları, çok daha sağlam fikirler var kafamda.)
Kerem Beyit

Old 03 March 2005   #6
Nice concept art you got there, I like the "Arabian Nights" feel of the overall picture. Rock on!

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Old 03 March 2005   #7
Concept Sketch: Hamam3

Hamam 3 concept sketch.
Kerem Beyit

Old 03 March 2005   #8
Welcome to the challege. Looks interesting! I ll follow your progress
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Old 03 March 2005   #9

Coreius, fooxoo thanks for your feedback
Kerem Beyit

Old 03 March 2005   #10
selamlar! (deviant'tan silveraxe ben )

i love the one with two fellas pouring water to the bath! the "hamam" idea is great!

best of luck!!
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Old 03 March 2005   #11

Vay herkes burada Sketch 3 has too much symmetry... I guess I should do something about that. Thanks a lot for the feedback
Kerem Beyit

Old 03 March 2005   #12
hi, good concept, i prefer the first sketch, but is only my opinion, the composition of this first is more homogene, good work i wait the suite
Old 03 March 2005   #13
I like the first one too Still, I have to search for alternatives. Maybe I should draw a concept with ruthless sheikh instead of mistress... Well let's wait and see. Thanks for the feedback.
Kerem Beyit

Old 03 March 2005   #14
The demons are awesome

Looking really great so far. I can't wait to see the color studies should be very intersting
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Old 03 March 2005   #15
Smile Master and Servant

I think that the first one "hamam 3" seems to be best as for the composition.. The concept of "hamam" in the "master and servant" subject is appropriate and i strongly believe that you'll come up with something great(as usual).
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