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Old 03-23-2005, 06:56 AM   #1
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Master and Servant 2D Entry: stephen schirle

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Latest Update: Coloring WIP: Color update


small update,

thanks for the crits everyone, very helpful
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Old 03-27-2005, 03:25 AM   #2
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Concept Sketch: medusaa



ack, getting started late it seems, you people are QUICK! anyways heres alittle scribble of some idea thats playing through my head... more on that idea later.
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Old 03-28-2005, 01:23 AM   #3
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Concept Sketch: who's who?



Playing with the idea of Who is really in control here? who's the submissive and who's the master? this one appears to be the snakes in control, but who knows? its medusa.. this could be one of her dirt little tricks...
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Old 03-28-2005, 08:04 AM   #4
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I like the theme of the snakes vs the medusa, but I guess tis picture will need high emotion expression on the face to bring out the "Master and Servant" theme. Will be watching you progress

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Old 03-28-2005, 08:26 AM   #5
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Wow, I'm really impressed by your sketches : great flow, great expression, and good sense of anatomy !
The idea of somebody possessed and controlled by an invisible master is simply one of the best idea around here.
So I'll watch your thread with interest.
Keep it up !
 
Old 03-28-2005, 12:01 PM   #6
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this looks excellent,but i must warn u sumone has aleady done medusa..and a very similar type of composition.
 
Old 03-28-2005, 12:05 PM   #7
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Hey nice sketches there!!!Good luck and fun 2 U
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Old 03-29-2005, 06:25 PM   #8
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Line Art: roughed in bg



Ok i roughed in the background and a face, just to get a feel for composition/emotion(will probably still play with that). now i need to start realizing some of the shapes more, figure out what things are and play with the readabilty with a few things.

thanks for the comments guys :)

Noob: I dont think i've seen it yet, but im sure there will be alittle overlap with this many contestants and this theme inparticular. I think i found an original story to go along with and feel comfortable enough with it to not worry about it being similar to someone elses..
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Old 03-30-2005, 05:09 AM   #9
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hey stephen, cool pics. I like how the snake is the anchor point for her in the back of her head, disturbing. My only suggestion would be to maybe break up the rhythm of her snake tail a little bit. Whats that basketball for haha...anyways, the face looks awesome, cant wait to see it painted up.
 
Old 03-30-2005, 05:31 AM   #10
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Line Art: Alittle more background..



Went kinda slow today, just blocked in some background elements alittle more, still tweaking things here and there.. i want to add some jewlery to medusa, add mabye some weapons or armor scattered around the ground.... it all looks alittle distracting right now, but should fall back when i start to add value/colors.

thanks jerry!
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Old 03-30-2005, 05:50 AM   #11
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looking forward to this one mate, love the sketch work, just blocking in that small portion of the chicks face just brought the image to life. Keep it up.
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Old 03-30-2005, 10:21 PM   #12
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Looks rad, burn. I like the position of the snake body a lot more in the 1st sketch you did..how it's sorta forming a hump. Looks more organic.
The set elements look cool so far, and the idea rules. Nice stylez, yo.
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Old 03-31-2005, 02:10 AM   #13
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i agree with brasshorse, the snake looked better in the first initial sketch, right now it seems a little rigid in the body twords the background, kind of like a hose but the figure is great, fleshing out the face makes it more real. Good stuff

ps. magnetohead in the foreground. decapitated stylez.
 
Old 03-31-2005, 07:38 AM   #14
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Line Art: pose update



Thanks for the comments aaron and tim. unfortunately i could never get that pose to work how i intended so i've changed it up alittle in this newest update.
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Old 03-31-2005, 08:46 AM   #15
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Good sketches. I like the gesture of her, especially the with her legs spread that way.
I would change her facial expression though. Something with more emotion. Can't wait to see some colors.

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