Zombie Nation (A Documentary Spoof)

hi, me and some friends are working on a comedy documentary about Zombies, we have bgun scripting and are in our very early stages, its made for our Media A level practical production, please tell me what you think of it so far, its still in rough version and a small section needs rewriting:

http://matscript.freewebspace.com/ZN2.htm

please let me know what you think

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