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  02 February 2005
Second attemp

Ok here my second painting. I watched a video tut. i found here around and tried to make something similar.



What do you mean / or what i can i "fix / add" ?

Thanks
 
  02 February 2005
I think it needs more stuff on it... It looks like a lake now- if you remove the connection between the two shores it will look like a bay (I hope this is the right word). You can add some light on the sides to make them look like rocks. Finally I think the reflection of the sun should be stright under it, not right of it. Of course there is no reason to listen me, those are just some ideas, but I think it will become a very nice peace if you work more on it.
 
  02 February 2005
I agree with Tzax what you could fix: Sun reflection directliy below original. The direction of the waves should be more horizontally. Reflections could be scaled vertically - look at some references to see what I mean. Btw, the sun seems to be a little too blurry to me.
what you could add: Think about lighting just edges towards the sun in those dark areas (buildings/rocks/trees).
 
  02 February 2005
Thanks for all your suggestions guys !
Great support here
 
  02 February 2005
Ok , here with some changes


Last edited by dvz : 02 February 2005 at 06:24 PM.
 
  02 February 2005
that looks good the things in the background (stars?) look a lot like lense flares, but they kinda work

maybe you could throw in a moon in there? i think it would look cool with a nice quarter mooon near the water keeping the same yellowish orange colour theme over it
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