Honey Girl, Mohammad Ali Shakeri (3D)

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  02 February 2005
Honey Girl, Mohammad Ali Shakeri (3D)



Title: Honey Girl
Name: Mohammad Ali Shakeri
Country: Iran
Software: 3ds max

This is a realestic human head modeling
i used 3dsmax 5 for it and default scanline
a strong light from behind
all comments are welcome
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  02 February 2005
Hi, like the style, doesn't look too realistic though, if you are aiming for realism I think there's quite a lot of facial proportions that are out on the model. the realationship between the eyes, mouth and nose is really important to get right. The eyes are a bit too big, and the nose/mouth seem far to far away from the eyes.
 
  02 February 2005
hi;

model and texturing really nice but u could make a better hair style...

so good job congratulations....
 
  02 February 2005
You say you aim at realism, but why the render with such strange lighting, in greyscale and with the noise on top? That is not realism, as the proportions are not.

But besides the point of realism, I think this is a pretty picture anyway.
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  02 February 2005
Very nice, good job!
 
  02 February 2005
some critique

scary eyes..., eyebrow a bit to distant from the eyes
nose seems like she had a nose job, the bridge of the nose is too skinny then it suddenly going wider
the lip is nice
pretty long neck
nice hair. but she might need a haircut cos if you wanna show realistic human, but the hair is in the way, it seems like you wanna hide something...
 
  02 February 2005
To me she seems more a cartonish girl. In fact a nice cartoonish girl. Your style is great, but if your goal was realist modeling, you must to practice a little more.
 
  02 February 2005
Hi
Tanx for comments
I m agree with u that it doesn t look realist
i done it 2 years ago and it was my first low poly modeling and so human modeling!
i m glad that u interested in
i should work more on hair and the size and position of nose and eyes and also should bring the eyebrow near the eye
tanx again and bye
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  04 April 2005
hi

nice work ali ,its a still image? or have a animation
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  04 April 2005
tanx ali_rahimi
it is just a practice on human face about 2 years ago
at now i have more abilities on modelling humans
so i prefer to leave this carachter and work on a more complete charachter for animation
i promiss to made a realstic animation of human
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  04 April 2005
hello everybody !

سلام علی جان
خوشحالم که اینجا می بینمت
به نظرم اگر کمی سعی کنی که واقعگرایانه تر کار کنی بهتر باشه البته ببخش که فضولی می کنما
امیدوارم که موفق باشی
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Last edited by x3dman : 04 April 2005 at 05:11 AM.
 
  04 April 2005
hello everybody !

hi dear ali .

nice to see you here .
your honey is tuneful but if you try to realistic it will be so better .

good luck !

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  04 April 2005
tanx Hadi
i m trying but my favorite is cartoonish modelling
tanx for your reply and CC
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  04 April 2005
Great work so far! i loved the modelling part! as u said u could made the hairs and eyes,and texturing better! hop u'll do it!

keep it up!
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  04 April 2005
tanx Madlight,
it will be done
i m searching for free time to complete this model.
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