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Old 02-10-2005, 08:58 PM   #1
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10 second club WIP


Here is my progress for this months 10 second club. Let me know what you think of it so far.

Old 02-10-2005, 09:47 PM   #2
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The acting of your character doesn't make sense. It's acting out the sentences sort of but it doesn't give me a good feeling of character. Maybe it's the model you are using, because it doesn't have any eyes / pupils. Eyes are the soul of the character and I think would help a lot.
The lipsync is pretty nice and your timing isn't really bad either. I miss the feel of an unique character in that little alien of yours, that would be my biggest crit
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