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Old 02-03-2005, 09:24 AM   #1
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Hey all,
here's one of my animation from my last animation class

http://www.triyani.com/anim/hatchFinal.mov

the model was provided from the class...
critique are more than welcome ( so next time it'll be better :wise

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Old 02-03-2005, 11:50 AM   #2
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nice acting but I think not enough Cartoon....

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Old 02-03-2005, 07:30 PM   #3
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thanks.. but hmmm.. what do you mean by not enough cartoon?
 
Old 02-03-2005, 07:51 PM   #4
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good work!

I think there should be more anticipation before the orange guy kicks the dude from the back, both in timing and action, also the kick seems to pop a bit and could use more force, you know, exaggeration.

my two cents
 
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thanks for the comment,
 
Old 02-03-2005, 11:50 PM   #6
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Great job!! Keep up the good work. This is my favorite piece of yours!!! Very funny.

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Old 02-04-2005, 04:21 AM   #7
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two parts I love the most are when the yellow guy leans forward to get up onto the hatch ledge and when he tries to keep his ballance.. well done!

the only part I would focus on, is to find another solution to how the orange guy kicks him in. maybe he needs to be closer.

Oh and if the orange peered down into the hole to give the viewer foresight into the dark hole..
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Old 02-04-2005, 04:38 AM   #8
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thank you for the critique..
yeah .. about the camera.. at that time we're assigned not to change the camera
but good point..
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