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Old 02 February 2005   #1

Hey all,
here's one of my animation from my last animation class

the model was provided from the class...
critique are more than welcome ( so next time it'll be better :wise

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Last edited by vilen13 : 02 February 2005 at 10:05 AM.
Old 02 February 2005   #2

nice acting but I think not enough Cartoon....

Old 02 February 2005   #3
thanks.. but hmmm.. what do you mean by not enough cartoon?
Old 02 February 2005   #4
good work!

I think there should be more anticipation before the orange guy kicks the dude from the back, both in timing and action, also the kick seems to pop a bit and could use more force, you know, exaggeration.

my two cents
Old 02 February 2005   #5
thanks for the comment,
Old 02 February 2005   #6
Great job!! Keep up the good work. This is my favorite piece of yours!!! Very funny.

Impossibilities are limits placed by those who lack imagination.

Last edited by Aluuk : 02 February 2005 at 11:55 PM.
Old 02 February 2005   #7
two parts I love the most are when the yellow guy leans forward to get up onto the hatch ledge and when he tries to keep his ballance.. well done!

the only part I would focus on, is to find another solution to how the orange guy kicks him in. maybe he needs to be closer.

Oh and if the orange peered down into the hole to give the viewer foresight into the dark hole..
"You can't depend on your eyes if your imagination is out of focus." - Mark Twain
Old 02 February 2005   #8
thank you for the critique..
yeah .. about the camera.. at that time we're assigned not to change the camera
but good point..
Rini Sugianto

Old 02 February 2006   #9
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