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  01 January 2005
family(nudity)

the update from this stage are on page 3. thank you.


the eye shader is staffan linder's which i downloaded from http://www.highend3d.com/maya/shaders/ .





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Last edited by smaddl : 09 September 2005 at 08:54 PM.
 
  01 January 2005
errrm...?!

hmm, must be somewhat disencouraging to get nor replies on such great models after 3 days...
the male looks well proportioned; the overall musculature is well defined but needs some work in the shoulder- and armarea ! i dont really like those kind of eyes, but thats only a matter of taste
overall a great model !

the girl reminds me a bit of your "lady"... did you use her as a base ? anyway, for my taste the nose could be a bit narrower, but overall its an excellent model too.

just hang in there !

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  01 January 2005
wow!! thank you valentine

no replies makes me wonder why. i guess it might be because the models are regular and not very special. i want them to look like a normal family but actually to be a disturbed one.

the father arm isn't done yet. could you point out what to fix in the shoulder?
started the girl's head from the father's head, basically it's the same topology.

thank you for the encouragement.


i softened the girl face a little, not sure about the hair line, still searcing.


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Last edited by smaddl : 02 February 2005 at 05:17 PM.
 
  01 January 2005
Beautiful models!

very fleshy and realistic !

great wires and very clean work!

not much to critisize....

i can not wait to see this family textured and coming to life....

keep with the excellent work!

you know i belive in you
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  01 January 2005
hi smaddl,

heres a little image to illustrate what you can improve on the shoulderarea (i hope u dont mind that i painted onto your image :P)



the bicep is to knobby and to big in the upper area! you should get some references for the forearm

the mother has a great topology, very clean. the problem is, that she has some male features on her - u should soften the lines a bit

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  01 January 2005
thank you for reply

SUS - ma hiti osa biladech? you'r encouraging as always. looking forward to see a new model of yours.

valentine - the wire is the father's . about your corrections - you absolutely right. thank's. hope to get back to him soon.

here is the mom's update. changed the face and worked a bit more on the body. any comment is very welcome.





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  01 January 2005
Nice modeling. Stern looking parents they are.. mother's forehead seems slightly angular to me though.. but i think that's a subjective issue...
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  02 February 2005
RealCapri - thank's you're right about the parents. i'd like to make some scenes with them. the first one is the girl wearing her mom's brassiere and heel shoes standing in front of a mirror with a lipstick in her hand. the father looks at her smiling while the mother looks at him with an unsatisfied expression.

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  02 February 2005
Hmmm... sounds beautiful.. the first impression that it gave me was the family warmth it conveyed. Somehow I had this image of it during sunset with warm lights shining thru the window from a corner & onto this little girl while she's "dolling up". Look forward to your final image.
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  02 February 2005
thank you RealCapri i'm almost by myself in this thread... actually thinking it's going to be a night scene. the parents are going to get out. i might use your idea to another scene. thank's
btw what's the meaning of "dolling up"? is it using cosmetics to look like a doll?

(updated the first post with the mother wip)
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  02 February 2005
Good models, but i must admit i find them a bit creepy. I would'nt use the same head for two models, especially in case of the adults. The woman is scary. Maybe you should lover the Gastrocnemius, Soleus and Peroneus Longus muscle a bit on the male.
 
  02 February 2005
Talking

haha.. i use the word "dolling up" just to describe her playing around with her mum's cosmetics pretending she's already grown-up. I think that's what alot of kids do, playing cooking, taking care dolls, etc.. they just want to play being adults.
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  02 February 2005
thank you for replying

dan0891- hope they are less creepy now. i don't think the problem is with using the same head but with how i manage to do with them. my current update is my new start point, think the mom and child heads are looking different although the are basically the same topology. when i'll get back to the male i'll reduce those muscles volume. thank's

RealCapri - very nice expression, i'm improving my english through this fantastic forum. thank you.
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  02 February 2005
Wooooooo hooooooooo!

the updates on top are amazing!
i'm really amazed!
great progress!
the mother and little girl are superb!
both are so beautiful and very realistic!
pashut mushlam!

i have just one little critic- the mother's eyebrows too rounded imo.
it's your choice of styling, but you might try to make them a little less rounded.
i think it will make her sexier.

it's time to move on to textures!

keep it up!
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  02 February 2005
Smile

I would like to give some crits

but it seems like you know what you are doing

i especially like the first image

very nice job
 
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