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Old 01-03-2005, 06:56 AM   #1
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WIP: Kung-fu/Superhero style animation

Hey everybody. This is my first attempt at using Character Studio. Well, besides the tutorials... I gotta tell ya, I really nailed the one where you make the guy use an iron.

Anyway, I've done a version where the camera moves and another one with a still camera, so the animation is easier to rip apart. I was inspired by, and used, some Bruce Lee moves, as well as the 'air juggle' technique Treyarch developed for the Spiderman 2 videogame. This is actually something I'm working on as a sort of freeform test for one of my contacts on the inside, and imitation - in this particular case - was encouraged.



Moving Camera: http://www.kraeeranimation.com/movingCam.avi

Still Camera: http://www.kraeeranimation.com/stillCam.avi

I'm definitely looking for C & C as I keep going. The plan at this point, from where the clip ends, is to have the red guy piledrive the guy on the ground. Oh, that guy on the ground, who just lies there after the leg sweep, will get up feebly in the final piece also...almost immediately after he's knocked down... so he can be beaten further.

Thanks friends!
 
Old 01-04-2005, 02:02 AM   #2
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Very nice, but they seem like fighting in the "moon"... I mean, with little gravity in some movements. I don´t feel so much weigh at some points.

Hope you understand what I´m trying to say.

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Old 01-04-2005, 02:53 PM   #3
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yar I'm not the best at gravity myself, but that and the collisions are not very realistic.

they "float" around too much imho and the impact of the hits is not very intense and almost non-existent in some places.

You can fix that with creative camera cuts and shakes, but you will have to tweak the curves of the animation too to reflect the impacts and decrease the "floating"

oh yah, after the first guy gets taken down, he shouldn't just lay flat like that...I don't know anyone that would get knocked out from a leg sweep. Maybe if you had him rolling around like his leg was broke...but just having him sit there static is distracting imho.

you are good at the fighting animation though, keep it up...
I'm actually going to be doing a similar animation soon, so I'll actually prolly refer to yours for that. Just mess with the gravity, collisions, and that one guy and you'll be set!

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Old 01-04-2005, 04:55 PM   #4
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Hey guys...thanks for checking it out. Yeah, that second guy is going to get up, I'm planning on working on that today.

So the two things that seem to be the biggest problems are the "floatiness" and the impacts...as far as cutting away with the camera, I'm actually planning to leave it still, to let the animation speak for itself. So I better make it good, heh.

So, to tweak the curves in Character Studio, you generally use 'The Workbench', right? Or were you just speaking generally about the best way to fix this stuff? I think I have to do some more tutorials on the workbench today, the last few times I tried using it I had no clue what was going on.

Thanks again for taking a look!
 
Old 01-04-2005, 06:32 PM   #5
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As far as "animating gravity goes", is hand-keying the animation the only traditional way in these cases? Is there a way to check your gravity animation automatically and see if it makes sense, or is that a judgement call on the artist's part?
 
Old 01-04-2005, 07:06 PM   #6
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Usually it's on the artist. It's the thing that gives me the most trouble, I think.

It's done by working with both the characters in the viewports, and tweaking curves. You basically have to learn when a person should dip, when they should shift their weight from one foot to another, and when they should rise up a little, as if they're in mid-air.

Heh, I'm still learning.
 
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Update... Added motion to the guy who gets the sweep, added animation to other two characters (web sling and piledriver), and added environment and began lighting tests.

I've also tried a couple different camera animations:

Angle 1: http://www.kraeeranimation.com/kungfu010705A.avi

Angle 2: http://www.kraeeranimation.com/kungfu010705B.avi

And here's the lighting test (Final Gather style):



I also worked on the hits to try to give them a little more 'oompf'. Hope it looks better....

C & C is always appreciated!

Thanks for checking it out...

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Old 01-08-2005, 09:36 PM   #8
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spiderman! haha..sweet...I'd say add some more speed variation in the animation..when they first get punched, they should be moving really fast when being launched back, then at the conclusion of the action, they slow down a tad bit
 
Old 01-09-2005, 05:35 PM   #9
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Hey thanks man. I worked a little more on that this weekend, and finally felt good enough about it to do a render.

I'm using Final Gather though, so it's taking forever. Should look pretty good though.

In the meantime, I've been working on some 'punch effects'...to mark where the impacts take place:

http://www.kraeeranimation.com/test1.mov



Thanks for checking it out!
 
Old 01-11-2005, 11:50 PM   #10
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One thing I would change is at the very end when the guys brings the guys up then turns him upside down then slams him on the ground head first. This sequence doesn’t look right to me for some reason. One, he goes up reaches the pinnacle of his jump with absolutely no rotation at all, then suddenly spins in the opposite direction his rotation should be going from by brining his legs up. When he brings his legs up around the guy’s waist to get his grip, his body weight would begin to shift more towards the back, but then you have him do a complete 180 and he flips the guy forward instead. Now I understand he seems to have some superhero like qualities, but if this is the case, keep the rules of your world constant. If this guy can defy gravity like this, then don’t have him stumble on his back turning kick like you have him do at the beginning. At first I thought this stumble was kool, good detail, but then when I saw what he was capable of doing (practically flying through air and defying the laws of physics) it seems to me he should have better balance than that then. Also at the very end when he lands, its hard to tell because of the black background, but it seems like the way he lands he should be not only crushing the guy he brought down, but breaking his own neck as well, because his head is actually closer to the ground it appears after the rotation from the fall by the time he reaches the ground. But I could be viewing it wrong since there is really no ground in the scene. but id figure id point it out for you to look at anyway^^. Anyway, that’s all I can think of. I really wanted to comment on this one because, I love marital arts, trained in it for very long time and would love to see a really nice martial arts animation (which I think this will become by the time you are done^^) Good job so far, good luck

(if any of my explanations are confusing, let me know and I will try and explain them better. Good luck^^)
 
Old 01-11-2005, 11:58 PM   #11
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Hey thanks man. I totally see where you're coming from. It's funny you mentioned that last sequence, that was actually singled out for the same things by another friend I've shown the piece to.

I'm working on those very things right now, I think it's looking better. I'll try to post a new Preview AVI in a bit.

In the meantime, here's the final gather I did over the weekend before these new critiques:

http://www.kraeeranimation.com/heroFight.mov

And with bones showing:

http://www.kraeeranimation.com/heroFightBones.mov

I'll probably do the same render style on the new tweaked version as well.

Thanks for checking it out!
 
Old 01-12-2005, 12:11 AM   #12
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Nice, new updates looking better^^. Coming along nice^^. cant wait to see the next string of updates, keep up the good work
 
Old 01-12-2005, 08:39 PM   #13
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Updates:

Without bones:

http://www.kraeeranimation.com/heroFightA.mov

With bones:

http://www.kraeeranimation.com/heroFightBonesA.mov

I basically re-did all the motion at the end, to create a more realistic motion. Now, the hero grabs the guy by the back of the head and mashes his face into the pavement.

He also bounds back up from that move more like you'd expect (I think).



Let me know what you think!
 
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I tend to agree with the others on this one, the gravity looks a little off, still.. even though it is spider man, there is some what of a..lag? when the final jump and punch scene takes place..much like this guy --->

i am amazed, however, by your use of many bipeds, and all of them having their own special movements, keep it up
 
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I like what you have done with this since I last checked it out. My only criticism is still the lack of realism in the blows.

That being said, I think it would help to have camera cuts and/or some creative zooms to help intensify the combat. I know that would come later, but it's one way I can tell you would help alot. I like the post and pre-air combo motion, but it seems like once they go into the air it get strange.

hope I'm not being to hard, but I am a big fighting game afficianado and a bigger fan of action movies...so I want to see this be awesome. ^^

keep it up though, this has come a long way from that 1st clip!!!
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